Wedding Night
Promise Kept8 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
Going from the 'Tall trees like giant sentinels, watch us close as we dance along.' to the continued thoughts of 'what the tall trees, birds, frogs and pond, knew already, we're meant to be.' Simply fantastic!
Best of luck in the Use These Words writing contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Going from the 'Tall trees like giant sentinels, watch us close as we dance along.' to the continued thoughts of 'what the tall trees, birds, frogs and pond, knew already, we're meant to be.' Simply fantastic!
Best of luck in the Use These Words writing contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this great review and the best wishes. :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I enjoyed this poem. It is almost like a story within a poem. I should do well as an entry for the Use These Words writing prompt. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed this poem. It is almost like a story within a poem. I should do well as an entry for the Use These Words writing prompt. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and great review.
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a beautiful poem that commemorates the love between two people who fall in love and become husband and wife. The act of marriage is almost always coupled with the unending optimism of eternal bliss. A little part of me would like to revisit this couple in ten years. Well written, Best of luck on the contest entry.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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This is a beautiful poem that commemorates the love between two people who fall in love and become husband and wife. The act of marriage is almost always coupled with the unending optimism of eternal bliss. A little part of me would like to revisit this couple in ten years. Well written, Best of luck on the contest entry.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this wonderful 6 star review, it means a lot me. Have a excellent weekend! :)
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
A beautiful romantic poem that skillfully integrates the required words. You evoke an event that will never be forgotten in the minds of your poem's characters, and will be equally unforgettable in the minds of some readers.
Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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A beautiful romantic poem that skillfully integrates the required words. You evoke an event that will never be forgotten in the minds of your poem's characters, and will be equally unforgettable in the minds of some readers.
Well done!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
This was a sweet piece of writing about a couple on their wedding night. You can see the love that they have for each other which comes through well in your writing. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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This was a sweet piece of writing about a couple on their wedding night. You can see the love that they have for each other which comes through well in your writing. A well written piece, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and for taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a beautiful poem you have penned for the words in a poem prompt. The required words are seamlessly incorporated. And it's such a beautiful love story. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is such a beautiful poem you have penned for the words in a poem prompt. The required words are seamlessly incorporated. And it's such a beautiful love story. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this awesome review.
Comment from roof35
This is a lovely tribute to your "spot." I do think you have a typo you might want to fix. I think you meant Our passions high not hight. Otherwise, this is nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is a lovely tribute to your "spot." I do think you have a typo you might want to fix. I think you meant Our passions high not hight. Otherwise, this is nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for pointing out that error and for reading my poem.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a beautifully written, very descriptive poem. Your great word choice paints a vivid picture in the mind of their wedding night and the stroll they took when they first met. It makes the reader feel the endless love they have for each other. Their hopes and dreams for the future. Nicely done, good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is a beautifully written, very descriptive poem. Your great word choice paints a vivid picture in the mind of their wedding night and the stroll they took when they first met. It makes the reader feel the endless love they have for each other. Their hopes and dreams for the future. Nicely done, good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
