Unfixable
Some love is...9 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
'devoid of the sun.' My favorite phrase. So strong!
Best of luck in the Poem With These Words (love - hate - clean - filthy) writing contest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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'devoid of the sun.' My favorite phrase. So strong!
Best of luck in the Poem With These Words (love - hate - clean - filthy) writing contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the nice review and best wishes.
Comment from Janet Foor
I have heard that some things can't be fixed and I guess this is one of those times.
I think you covered all the required words in your poem. I always think it is a challenge to have specific words to use and still make sense. I think you did very well
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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I have heard that some things can't be fixed and I guess this is one of those times.
I think you covered all the required words in your poem. I always think it is a challenge to have specific words to use and still make sense. I think you did very well
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you. I love the use these words contests, they're a lot of fun. Thank you for reading.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an excellent entry for the Poem With These Words writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish the best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the Poem With These Words writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish the best of luck to you!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you, that's so nice of you to say. :)
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Poem With These Words contest. It's a familiar love story, the way it starts and how it ends. Well, good relationships are different than this. I like the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
gypsy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Poem With These Words contest. It's a familiar love story, the way it starts and how it ends. Well, good relationships are different than this. I like the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
gypsy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind words, it's much appreciated. :)
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Good poem however I do have one suggestion! You really need a line break or a stanza break because the way it is it is difficult to read because all the words are running together;-)
Loved the colors and imagery!
Good luck in the contest;-) Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Good poem however I do have one suggestion! You really need a line break or a stanza break because the way it is it is difficult to read because all the words are running together;-)
Loved the colors and imagery!
Good luck in the contest;-) Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your suggestion, I did change it. I appreciate you reading.
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;-)
Comment from roof35
You followed the rules and penned a good entry for the contest. I have to admit, it was sobering at the end. It is well written with no errors. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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You followed the rules and penned a good entry for the contest. I have to admit, it was sobering at the end. It is well written with no errors. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Wow, that was a downer, but very good. I don't know what to tell you if it is true stuff. Whenever I got into a relationship, I don't mean an affair, I told him that if preferred someone else just tell me. It will be heard if you really love someone, and maybe I didn't really love these men that I told that to.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Wow, that was a downer, but very good. I don't know what to tell you if it is true stuff. Whenever I got into a relationship, I don't mean an affair, I told him that if preferred someone else just tell me. It will be heard if you really love someone, and maybe I didn't really love these men that I told that to.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Relationships can be hard, but once you meet your soulmate you'll know. Thanks for reading. :)
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It will be hard. Yes I have my soulmate.
Comment from AnnieDawn
Even though your poem does not rhyme in a usual way, you have used all of the required words for the contest so this should be a valid entry. I would place this more in the free form of poetry as the rhyming words are not all exact. No matter it is well done. Great job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Even though your poem does not rhyme in a usual way, you have used all of the required words for the contest so this should be a valid entry. I would place this more in the free form of poetry as the rhyming words are not all exact. No matter it is well done. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem , I really appreciate your comments.
Comment from kahpot
Very well written, how love grows and then something brings it down in no time at all, and yes some broken love cannot be fixed, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Very well written, how love grows and then something brings it down in no time at all, and yes some broken love cannot be fixed, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and for this great review. :)
