The Golden Touch
5/7/5 Sensing the divine in nature...15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing more soothing than a sun beam, especially when it highlights the valleys with uplifting divine light, I enjoyed the scene you describe here, love Dolly x
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There is nothing more soothing than a sun beam, especially when it highlights the valleys with uplifting divine light, I enjoyed the scene you describe here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely, elegant, masterful alliteration with clever internal rhyme: sunshine's streaming beams--and play on LIF--uplift life. This may be a winner! Cheers. LIZ
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Lovely, elegant, masterful alliteration with clever internal rhyme: sunshine's streaming beams--and play on LIF--uplift life. This may be a winner! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your poem has a lot going on--internal near rhyme or assonance rhyme streaming/beam ; cross rhyme of entwine/divine ; a good message ;and an appropriate color scheme.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Jan
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your poem has a lot going on--internal near rhyme or assonance rhyme streaming/beam ; cross rhyme of entwine/divine ; a good message ;and an appropriate color scheme.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Jan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with very good imagery of the sun and its impact
of nature and life.
Nice choice of colors too.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with very good imagery of the sun and its impact
of nature and life.
Nice choice of colors too.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
There is divine touch, flavor, grace and beauty in every object on earth since all and everything God creates and offers us in Nature; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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There is divine touch, flavor, grace and beauty in every object on earth since all and everything God creates and offers us in Nature; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
