Winter
Chilling Out11 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Writer. I like the internal rhymes, the near rhymes and end rhymes, the bold first letter of each line, and the amazing image. No snow here for quite a ways into winter if any--103* Saturday & Sunday.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Jan
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Writer. I like the internal rhymes, the near rhymes and end rhymes, the bold first letter of each line, and the amazing image. No snow here for quite a ways into winter if any--103* Saturday & Sunday.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Jan
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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wow! It's hot where you are. In Minnesota winter comes to early...it's already cold out. Thanks for reading my poem.
