Remember
3-5-3 contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Melissa Russell Deur
The artwork you selected led me to reread your poem several times. I love the message. It seems straightforward until I think about manipulated memories, and revised memories. Then I think about all the bridges into New York City. So many ways to get from "there" to "here," but what is the toll? Or, flipping it around, so many bridges to get from "here" to "there," which is where most psychologists might begin. Eleven syllables took me all around my world! Lovely poem!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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The artwork you selected led me to reread your poem several times. I love the message. It seems straightforward until I think about manipulated memories, and revised memories. Then I think about all the bridges into New York City. So many ways to get from "there" to "here," but what is the toll? Or, flipping it around, so many bridges to get from "here" to "there," which is where most psychologists might begin. Eleven syllables took me all around my world! Lovely poem!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Glad you enjoyed your trip down memory lane!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Memories are ever sweet-sour and sweet memories remain inside heart so they bridge the gap between then and now; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Memories are ever sweet-sour and sweet memories remain inside heart so they bridge the gap between then and now; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
Yes it's a significant and meaningful thought expressed in such a short and precise format and with a lovely seasonal visual to illustrate -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Yes it's a significant and meaningful thought expressed in such a short and precise format and with a lovely seasonal visual to illustrate -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this short piece. Thanks for the positive review.
