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All Things Good

In this life...

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Comment from Mimi Linny
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Great job in creating this Monorhyme observing the beauty of Mother Nature's four different; all different, but beautiful in their own way. Nice choice of rhyming words that work well with the story's theme. Nicely done - and good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem..much appreciated.
Comment from Fonda Little
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My favorite part was, "Spring starts slow, quite reticent, like a child that is shy,", because I've never heard the word reticent and I looked up what it means because I love learning new words and I wouldn't have been able to if you wouldn't have used it here in this poem so thank you!

The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,

1 Thessalonians 5:18
King James Version
18 In every thing give thanks: for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus concerning you.

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    I like looking up new words too. Thank you for reading my poem. :)