Wisdom
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good post!
Noticed a couple typos:
I was born in it and it growed (grew) up with me.
Another blessing is the challenges that my life through (threw) in front of me.
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This is a good post!
Noticed a couple typos:
I was born in it and it growed (grew) up with me.
Another blessing is the challenges that my life through (threw) in front of me.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from royowen
I'm inclined to agree with you Iza, my faith came late in life, (41) but my wife would easily be my second, children, grands etc. beautifully written, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : it (growed) up with me. Grew? 2: (through) up at me. Threw? 3: we (manged) managed? I
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I'm inclined to agree with you Iza, my faith came late in life, (41) but my wife would easily be my second, children, grands etc. beautifully written, good job, blessings Roy
Typo : it (growed) up with me. Grew? 2: (through) up at me. Threw? 3: we (manged) managed? I
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from estory
One spag: Grew, not growed. But a nice, to the point, little essay on the blessings of life. Sometimes it's the simple things, like those kitties, that remind you to be gentle. And faith is the most important thing. Most overlook it, but you seem grounded in it. estory
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One spag: Grew, not growed. But a nice, to the point, little essay on the blessings of life. Sometimes it's the simple things, like those kitties, that remind you to be gentle. And faith is the most important thing. Most overlook it, but you seem grounded in it. estory
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right, Iza. We all have ore blessings than we can ever count. I like the way you shared yours from family and faith to your adorable kitties.
May I suggest:
What are the blessings of my life? The biggest blessing is my faith; I was born in it and it growed [ grew ] up with me.
Another blessing is [ are ] the challenges that my life through in front of me. They made [ make ] me stronger and resilient.
Another blessing is my family, we are not perfect but we manged [ manage ] to keep united.
Another blessing are my kitties. They made [ make ] me more sensitive and easy going. [ easy-going ] They are funny, smart and playful and made [ help ] me forget about problems and hardship.
In conclusion (,) count your blessings and walk straight, any challenge it's [ is ] an opportunity.
Thank you for sharing your ideas.
Respectfully, Jan
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You are right, Iza. We all have ore blessings than we can ever count. I like the way you shared yours from family and faith to your adorable kitties.
May I suggest:
What are the blessings of my life? The biggest blessing is my faith; I was born in it and it growed [ grew ] up with me.
Another blessing is [ are ] the challenges that my life through in front of me. They made [ make ] me stronger and resilient.
Another blessing is my family, we are not perfect but we manged [ manage ] to keep united.
Another blessing are my kitties. They made [ make ] me more sensitive and easy going. [ easy-going ] They are funny, smart and playful and made [ help ] me forget about problems and hardship.
In conclusion (,) count your blessings and walk straight, any challenge it's [ is ] an opportunity.
Thank you for sharing your ideas.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Ben Colder
I must agree with the writer. Every challenge presents opportunity. Notice, when people wear their caps turned around, the sign is, they are not sure if they are coming or going.
You seem to have your thinking in order.
Thanks for sharing.
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I must agree with the writer. Every challenge presents opportunity. Notice, when people wear their caps turned around, the sign is, they are not sure if they are coming or going.
You seem to have your thinking in order.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written piece about wisdom in our daily lives comes from whatever we learn and the challenges we face to overcome give us a sense of wisdom at the end.
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the challenges that my life through(throw) in front of me.
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A very well-written piece about wisdom in our daily lives comes from whatever we learn and the challenges we face to overcome give us a sense of wisdom at the end.
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the challenges that my life through(throw) in front of me.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Mastery
Very nice post, Iza. You have counted your blessings just as we all should,especially in these scary times. I can tell that you have a big heart working for you also. Blessings on you and your family. :) Bob
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Very nice post, Iza. You have counted your blessings just as we all should,especially in these scary times. I can tell that you have a big heart working for you also. Blessings on you and your family. :) Bob
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This describes a life of simple blessings, which bring the author great happiness. I hope you may continue so. I particularly appreciated the last sentence of your writing
count your blessings and walk straight, any challenge it's an opportunity.
Spoken like a true optimist.
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This describes a life of simple blessings, which bring the author great happiness. I hope you may continue so. I particularly appreciated the last sentence of your writing
count your blessings and walk straight, any challenge it's an opportunity.
Spoken like a true optimist.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This chapter of your book discusses about the blessings that you have been given or gifted and you find each blessing is a challenge, an opportunity in living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This chapter of your book discusses about the blessings that you have been given or gifted and you find each blessing is a challenge, an opportunity in living; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(it growed up s/b grew; challenges my life through s/b threw; challenge IT'S an opportunity s/b IS. Point taken; I admire you attitude toward life! Cheers. LIZ
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(it growed up s/b grew; challenges my life through s/b threw; challenge IT'S an opportunity s/b IS. Point taken; I admire you attitude toward life! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020