Dewdrop Fire
A Nature 5-7-515 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Congratulations on winning the contest! Much deserved! I like your piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Congratulations on winning the contest! Much deserved! I like your piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your remarks, Raul. Much appreciated!
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You're welcome, my friend!
Comment from Bill Schott
This nature 5-7-5, Dewdrop Fire, has the right set up and sets the imagination off as the oxymoron draws a power from the web strength.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
This nature 5-7-5, Dewdrop Fire, has the right set up and sets the imagination off as the oxymoron draws a power from the web strength.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thanks Bill.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is absolutely gorgeous and I voted for it. I am sorry, I am all out of six stars, otherwise it would have been yours. Congratulations on the very deserved win. Exquisite imagery and visuals, I loved your artistic presentation and artwork.
I am happy it won.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
This is absolutely gorgeous and I voted for it. I am sorry, I am all out of six stars, otherwise it would have been yours. Congratulations on the very deserved win. Exquisite imagery and visuals, I loved your artistic presentation and artwork.
I am happy it won.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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I was happy it won too! Thanks so much for your support and review!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the Nature 5-7-5 entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
This is a fine thought for the Nature 5-7-5 entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you - aiming for short and sweet.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good alliteration of D. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow.
Good imagery of the cobweb.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good alliteration of D. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow.
Good imagery of the cobweb.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written nature 5-7-5 poem about the cobwebs dipped with some dewdrops Look like strings of pearls and diamonds in the early morning sun rays.
A very well-written nature 5-7-5 poem about the cobwebs dipped with some dewdrops Look like strings of pearls and diamonds in the early morning sun rays.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I'm not sure where to begin, you have so many wonderful literary techniques. The first one that stands outand will draw the reader in, is the personification. I do like yourbuse of alliteration. That really counts when read aloud as all poetry should be. You present delightful imagery with your metaphors. I have to give this A+ And I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
I'm not sure where to begin, you have so many wonderful literary techniques. The first one that stands outand will draw the reader in, is the personification. I do like yourbuse of alliteration. That really counts when read aloud as all poetry should be. You present delightful imagery with your metaphors. I have to give this A+ And I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and voting support in the contest. I'm pleased you like my poem so much.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the word "beading" in descriping the work of a spider. right away it give the wed a crafted feel. Make it feel more homemade somehow.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
I like the word "beading" in descriping the work of a spider. right away it give the wed a crafted feel. Make it feel more homemade somehow.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your comments. I admire beadwork done by crafters... and love to see it in nature. Some plants look like beads.
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck with your "Nature 5-7-5" contest entry. Very nice artwork however the visual I got from the words would not need artwork. Dewdrops comparison to fire was a very nice line. Best regards.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
Best of luck with your "Nature 5-7-5" contest entry. Very nice artwork however the visual I got from the words would not need artwork. Dewdrops comparison to fire was a very nice line. Best regards.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your generous review. I agree with your comment about illustrations - so often there are poems which could happily stand alone, but on this site the reviewers seem to expect a visual accompaniment. You clearly have a vivid imagination and can 'see' a poem, but many cannot, and need the words emphasised with an image.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine 5-7-5 with an ambient view of this diamond studded cobweb of beaded water droplets, you brought this scene alive with your metaphors here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
A fine 5-7-5 with an ambient view of this diamond studded cobweb of beaded water droplets, you brought this scene alive with your metaphors here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your nice review, Dolly.