Dewdrop Fire
A Nature 5-7-515 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
SSSSSStunning! I rarely give six for a 5-7-5 but your imagery is elegant and lovely--startling photo supports it. This may well be a winner! Cheerssssss. LIZ
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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SSSSSStunning! I rarely give six for a 5-7-5 but your imagery is elegant and lovely--startling photo supports it. This may well be a winner! Cheerssssss. LIZ
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Lucky me! Prising that 6 from your cache. Thank you very much.
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of alliteration and the "beading to admire" is beautifully evident in the great choice of picture! I do admire the spider's webs but rather they keep them outside. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Great use of alliteration and the "beading to admire" is beautifully evident in the great choice of picture! I do admire the spider's webs but rather they keep them outside. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thanks for reviewing! We get spiders' webs, but no poisonous spiders down here.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is filled with great imagery, Mystery Writer. Your image choice is beautiful, too. I like the alliteration of d and the end rhyme.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Your contest entry is filled with great imagery, Mystery Writer. Your image choice is beautiful, too. I like the alliteration of d and the end rhyme.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your complimentary review. I like that photo, it was more colourful than some other choices.
Comment from Vanna1
Good presentation. Nice use of words. This is an interesting poem the way you have highlighted a basic natural element in a fantasy like manner. Well done. Good luck. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Good presentation. Nice use of words. This is an interesting poem the way you have highlighted a basic natural element in a fantasy like manner. Well done. Good luck. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your nice comments about my poem. I love looking at cobwebs (as long as they're not in my home).
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful Nature 5-7-5 you have penned for the writing prompt entry contest. You used beautiful imagery and very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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This is a very beautiful Nature 5-7-5 you have penned for the writing prompt entry contest. You used beautiful imagery and very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Teri, for your wonderful review. God lets us see small moments of great beauty to uplift us.
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Yes He does. I love the art work you chose. love, Teri
