Caution, Careless Companions!
An alliteration challenge.14 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is brilliant. I have to vote for this. I will be surprised if anyone else creates such a clever masterpiece. If you had plopped Republican in there in a strategic spot I wouldn't have minded. Good job. Just a funny as we are on the subject of c sounds. We has a substitute in the 8th grade that when anyone asked to go to the "basement" (it was in the basement) She'd say, " Quickly, quietly and carefully." I think some asked just to hear her say it. We always wondered if she meant that was how we were supposed to urinate. Thought you'd enjoy that.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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This is brilliant. I have to vote for this. I will be surprised if anyone else creates such a clever masterpiece. If you had plopped Republican in there in a strategic spot I wouldn't have minded. Good job. Just a funny as we are on the subject of c sounds. We has a substitute in the 8th grade that when anyone asked to go to the "basement" (it was in the basement) She'd say, " Quickly, quietly and carefully." I think some asked just to hear her say it. We always wondered if she meant that was how we were supposed to urinate. Thought you'd enjoy that.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your support.
Peeing 'quickly, quietly and carefully' is very good advice, haha.
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is a lot of "c." This virus has cost us so much and the one thing that stands out above all else is the human connection. We no longer get together and celebrate or visit the way we did because of fear.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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That is a lot of "c." This virus has cost us so much and the one thing that stands out above all else is the human connection. We no longer get together and celebrate or visit the way we did because of fear.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thanks for reviewing. The virus has changed our social lives drastically - we are in transition to a new way of living. It seems this is going to hang around for a long time.
Comment from RShipp
Wow! Yes, you really outdid yourself with the 'c' sounds.
The picture you selected was very appropriate for your theme.
Best of luck in the Alliteration poem writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Wow! Yes, you really outdid yourself with the 'c' sounds.
The picture you selected was very appropriate for your theme.
Best of luck in the Alliteration poem writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
A fine entry for the Alliteration poem writing prompt contest. It must be hard to make the sentences make sense with all words starting with the same letter. You did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Hello anonymous
A fine entry for the Alliteration poem writing prompt contest. It must be hard to make the sentences make sense with all words starting with the same letter. You did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Yes it was hard to keep going with the same letter trying to make sense. Other people have done terrific jobs in this contest.
Comment from Boogienights
A lot of C words that make sense and impart some great advice. During covid we all need to take care. This will do well in the contest is my prediction. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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A lot of C words that make sense and impart some great advice. During covid we all need to take care. This will do well in the contest is my prediction. Best of luck.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your positive supportive comments!
Comment from Tina Crute
I believe I may have found a winner here! I was going through all the entries and saw your poem. You not only made the reading exciting, but your poem actually makes sense when you read it. Good luck in the contest!
Tina
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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I believe I may have found a winner here! I was going through all the entries and saw your poem. You not only made the reading exciting, but your poem actually makes sense when you read it. Good luck in the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your supportive review!
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You are welcome, anonymous:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written alliteration poem with the letter 'c' and to the subject about the coronavirus contamination that happens mostly in big groups of people .
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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A very well-written alliteration poem with the letter 'c' and to the subject about the coronavirus contamination that happens mostly in big groups of people .
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow. I think you sure took this and ran with it. I think maybe a little too much alliteration. But this was fun and enjoyable and I like how you took a serious current event and adding a little spin of fun on it. Great job.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Wow. I think you sure took this and ran with it. I think maybe a little too much alliteration. But this was fun and enjoyable and I like how you took a serious current event and adding a little spin of fun on it. Great job.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. It sure is an overdose of alliteration, but that is what the contest asked for.
Comment from Chelle_GH
Wow! Very timely piece... The alliteration approached & the choices of words are so relevant & conveyed a strong message regarding COVID.
Wishing you all the best!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Wow! Very timely piece... The alliteration approached & the choices of words are so relevant & conveyed a strong message regarding COVID.
Wishing you all the best!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. I think everyone is tired of hearing warnings about Covid, but we must keep on guard with habits to avoid infection.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
You might have hit a record, with your 60 C-words! And they are all relative to the issue most in everybody's mind today. Really a great achievement this Covid-19 warning pamphlet.
Well done!!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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You might have hit a record, with your 60 C-words! And they are all relative to the issue most in everybody's mind today. Really a great achievement this Covid-19 warning pamphlet.
Well done!!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your response to my poem. I think everyone is feeling rather jaded about the covid thingy so I probably should have picked a more uplifting topic.
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Why? This is good, and there are things we have to repeat and repeat.
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It's a pity some urgent things need to be repeated and repeated. Stupid people stop listening, if they ever listened in the first place.
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They risk their lives with this stubborn behavior. But warn them is all we can do. Yes, it is a pity. They will have to learn it the hard way.
