Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, along with
the imagery and rhyme.
-You paint a word picture
of the eagle as it looks down
from "its kingdom on high."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020

Thanks for your comments!

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Sep-2020

You are welcome.

Comment from amada

Excellent

Wow, this is a very good 5-7-5 words poem. It has movement, music and grace in its limited three lines. I always admire eagles, they are regal, no question about it. Best wishes, well done.

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review! i'm pleased you thought I captured the bird's attributes in my poem.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

They are indeed a majestic bird and they can soar at enormous heights, with eyesight like their own equipped to hover aloft for ages, using the power of the air currents to stay aloft. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020

Thanks, Roy. It sounds like you appreciate eagles' abilities like I do.

reply by royowen on 07-Sep-2020

I do indeed