There's a Brighter Light
Beyond the open door...9 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
When all the scenes of life pass by my eyes and loved ones smiles shine from paradise, I know I've come home, author. Life, right now, is what we make of it. The heavens are waiting for many of the chosen, many will live to see the future. Let's hope it is better. This is a good offering for the Faith Poetry contest.
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When all the scenes of life pass by my eyes and loved ones smiles shine from paradise, I know I've come home, author. Life, right now, is what we make of it. The heavens are waiting for many of the chosen, many will live to see the future. Let's hope it is better. This is a good offering for the Faith Poetry contest.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
Comment from ameen786
Brilliant poem, crafted skillfully in simple down to earth vocabulary phrased into meaningful and enlightening verses, reflecting poet's strong faith in hope; a definite winner, hands down!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Brilliant poem, crafted skillfully in simple down to earth vocabulary phrased into meaningful and enlightening verses, reflecting poet's strong faith in hope; a definite winner, hands down!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for your high-rating appreciation of my poem. I hope others like it as much as you do... or at least read it and feel enlightened or uplifted by it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt faith poem. It is a wonderful thought to think about when our light on this earth is blown out there will be a much brighter light waiting for us on the other side.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt faith poem. It is a wonderful thought to think about when our light on this earth is blown out there will be a much brighter light waiting for us on the other side.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thanks Sandra.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautiful writing. Clearly states of your strong faith and believe in god. Worlds been watered by Tragic tears and ground down by my fears. When my wick is turned down it's time to leave. There's a brighter light I believe. Very spiritual piece.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Beautiful writing. Clearly states of your strong faith and believe in god. Worlds been watered by Tragic tears and ground down by my fears. When my wick is turned down it's time to leave. There's a brighter light I believe. Very spiritual piece.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your warm comments about my poem.
Comment from amada
A very good poem using lots of when, where, why. It brings the reader to the present moment, because all of us has those when, whys, and why not. Very well done. One to remember.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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A very good poem using lots of when, where, why. It brings the reader to the present moment, because all of us has those when, whys, and why not. Very well done. One to remember.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your warm comments about my poem.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A nice spiritual poem with a grand artistic presentation and artwork. You bring out well that at the time of our darkest despair and fear God is always there, to guide and lead the way. He is there protecting us at every step - we just have to pray and have faith.
Nice rhyming and flow.
When the table's laid out with bread and wine,
a prayer to my Saviour divine
will centre my faith in a sacred space
so I can take heed of His grace.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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A nice spiritual poem with a grand artistic presentation and artwork. You bring out well that at the time of our darkest despair and fear God is always there, to guide and lead the way. He is there protecting us at every step - we just have to pray and have faith.
Nice rhyming and flow.
When the table's laid out with bread and wine,
a prayer to my Saviour divine
will centre my faith in a sacred space
so I can take heed of His grace.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your warm comments about my poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is a kind gentleness within these words, a calm and peaceful note of ambient joy in faith and seeing the light, a compassionate believable moments of hope here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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There is a kind gentleness within these words, a calm and peaceful note of ambient joy in faith and seeing the light, a compassionate believable moments of hope here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks for this lovely review.
Comment from Edward Escobar
I found a great strength from those words, along with the image you use to give a greater demonstration. I was moved by this spiritual prayer like verse. Thank you for sharing. Well said.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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I found a great strength from those words, along with the image you use to give a greater demonstration. I was moved by this spiritual prayer like verse. Thank you for sharing. Well said.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I'm pleased it imparted some strength to you. I was inspired spiritually to write this. I do not write poems about my faith very often, but the Lord moved me to write this.
Comment from royowen
This is a marvellous poem my friend, and is definitely a gem in this contest, written I immaculate verse, smooth narrative, In 10/8/10/8 and abcb rhyming,
my favourite part.
When my wick is turned down, it's time to leave -
There's a brighter light, I believe.
Well done, good luck, blessings. Roy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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This is a marvellous poem my friend, and is definitely a gem in this contest, written I immaculate verse, smooth narrative, In 10/8/10/8 and abcb rhyming,
my favourite part.
When my wick is turned down, it's time to leave -
There's a brighter light, I believe.
Well done, good luck, blessings. Roy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks Roy - it came to me as song lyrics, written quite quickly, clearly divine inspiration. I liked how it ended with "I believe". I admire your spiritual poetry, so I'm pleased you liked this one of mine.
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Well done, good job.
