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Comment from Mimi Linny
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Great dialogue emanating from your poem between "the devil" and his encounter. Love the repetitive questioning expressed and the quick quips in the devil's responses. And better yet, a perfectly fitting ending! Nicely put together!

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020

Comment from Sanku
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Yes I agree with the sentiment. Some evil force even the devil could not tolerate has been kicked down or (up? ) into this world .Hence we have all these terrible things happening.
well done.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2020