A Walk in the Park
My road back to normal54 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the art work you chose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
you captured my attention from the first line to the last. I found you poem interesting and funny to read.
Thank you for sharing have a safe and blessed weekend
Cookie
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I love the art work you chose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
you captured my attention from the first line to the last. I found you poem interesting and funny to read.
Thank you for sharing have a safe and blessed weekend
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much Miss Cookie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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it was my pleasure,take care
Cookie
Comment from Sanku
Oh! This is a very very brave two year struggle to get back on foot after a fall. I admire you for the grit and patience .Thanks for sharing .This will be a motivational poem for others.
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Oh! This is a very very brave two year struggle to get back on foot after a fall. I admire you for the grit and patience .Thanks for sharing .This will be a motivational poem for others.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about a doctor's opinion is not he final fate we heed to accept and live our lives according to his prediction. There is a higher power that can turn around any bad situation into something good.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about a doctor's opinion is not he final fate we heed to accept and live our lives according to his prediction. There is a higher power that can turn around any bad situation into something good.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an amazing story that defied the doctors and I am not sure i this is a true story or not, but I thought it was well thought out an delivered with great gusto, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This is an amazing story that defied the doctors and I am not sure i this is a true story or not, but I thought it was well thought out an delivered with great gusto, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much Dolly. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Wonderful autobiographical testimony, in poetic form, of the strength of your determination, the power of prayer and the grace of God in answering those prayers -- wow, just fantastic! Literally and figuratively, step by step, you went all the way from a shattered body to 5K and beyond! Congratulations and God bless you!
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Wonderful autobiographical testimony, in poetic form, of the strength of your determination, the power of prayer and the grace of God in answering those prayers -- wow, just fantastic! Literally and figuratively, step by step, you went all the way from a shattered body to 5K and beyond! Congratulations and God bless you!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, I'm honored with the six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Prayer and pure grit and determination. Well done! Your journey through adversity is described very well in poetic form, and took us along with you from wheelchair (or the threat thereof) to walking again. I'm also glad you defied the doctors' prognoses. They're not always right, so you have proved. Fabulous! Good luck xoxoxoxo
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Prayer and pure grit and determination. Well done! Your journey through adversity is described very well in poetic form, and took us along with you from wheelchair (or the threat thereof) to walking again. I'm also glad you defied the doctors' prognoses. They're not always right, so you have proved. Fabulous! Good luck xoxoxoxo
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"A Walk in the Park", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet has with craft and skill, told it as it is. It was a pleasure to both read and review a poem of this standard. To me, this is definitely a six. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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"A Walk in the Park", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet has with craft and skill, told it as it is. It was a pleasure to both read and review a poem of this standard. To me, this is definitely a six. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, I'm honored with the six star rating. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Dear Anon,
You're more than welcome, and definitely deserved the six stars.
God bless, take care and keep safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This reads like a winner to me. Your lines are smooth flowing, the rhymes are good, and your message of overcoming adversity is clear. Congratulations on a successful regimen to be able to walk again. Yes, prayer is the answer. The image is perfect, too.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This reads like a winner to me. Your lines are smooth flowing, the rhymes are good, and your message of overcoming adversity is clear. Congratulations on a successful regimen to be able to walk again. Yes, prayer is the answer. The image is perfect, too.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much Jan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from LisaMay
This is so inspiring! Thank you for showing us that medical opinion is not always correct. The power of prayer and determination is a very personal journey and you have walked it many times. Good on you!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This is so inspiring! Thank you for showing us that medical opinion is not always correct. The power of prayer and determination is a very personal journey and you have walked it many times. Good on you!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Ben Colder
For sure about the moving target. One thing about physical therapy keep it up and you will drop the pounds at the same time you get things in to new order.
Best to you.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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For sure about the moving target. One thing about physical therapy keep it up and you will drop the pounds at the same time you get things in to new order.
Best to you.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
