Compared to Sunrise
8 Word Poetry Contest Entry29 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
Your words made me smile thinking age is nothing but a number.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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I love the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
Your words made me smile thinking age is nothing but a number.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Cookie. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from Bill Schott
This eight-word poem, Compared to Sunrise, has the right word count and sends the good news that the twilight years are filled with romance, sunshine, and hand jobs.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This eight-word poem, Compared to Sunrise, has the right word count and sends the good news that the twilight years are filled with romance, sunshine, and hand jobs.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Bill.
Ron
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is a positive piece. It shares the love you have after being together so long. It speaks of the trials you have had to go through and the time you put into your marriage for it to last that long.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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This is a positive piece. It shares the love you have after being together so long. It speaks of the trials you have had to go through and the time you put into your marriage for it to last that long.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Mia. Yes, our time spent is priceless. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have yourself a wonderful night.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome what a milestone to reach. 50 years married each day still anew. Love the photo of the dancing couple. This really sums up this lovely piece of writing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Awesome what a milestone to reach. 50 years married each day still anew. Love the photo of the dancing couple. This really sums up this lovely piece of writing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Joanne. Yes, she makes each day precious. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
What a beautiful way to pay tribute to a long marriage! And it's a miracle if each day is counted as a new day. You said a lot in just eight words.
Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful way to pay tribute to a long marriage! And it's a miracle if each day is counted as a new day. You said a lot in just eight words.
Well done!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Susan. Yes, each day is a miracle. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a wonderful presentation and couples who stay the course benefit from so much love and understanding together, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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What a wonderful presentation and couples who stay the course benefit from so much love and understanding together, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Dolly. Yes, I cherish each day. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a lovely tribute to a wonderful marriage. Each day we rechoose the day and our situation and the people around us. We winter and summer those people, especially in a 50 yer marriage. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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This is a lovely tribute to a wonderful marriage. Each day we rechoose the day and our situation and the people around us. We winter and summer those people, especially in a 50 yer marriage. Congratulations.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Liz. Yes, every new day is special. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I enjoyed this entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest writing prompt. There is truth in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed this entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest writing prompt. There is truth in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and good luck wishes, Rebecca. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from equestrik
What a beautiful sentiment you have expressed here in the poem. I think it is so special when a couple spends that much time together and are still enamored with each other.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful sentiment you have expressed here in the poem. I think it is so special when a couple spends that much time together and are still enamored with each other.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, equestrik. Yes, she treats me right and I love every minute with her. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from donette1914
simply beautiful and wonderful!!!
very well done I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
the artwork went real well with your well penned poem
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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simply beautiful and wonderful!!!
very well done I hope the best in the contest
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
the artwork went real well with your well penned poem
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Donette. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
