Compared to Sunrise
8 Word Poetry Contest Entry29 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Even if a bit more predictable... in general - lol! ;) :) Such a wonderful contest offering for this extremely limited format! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls this evening! ;)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Even if a bit more predictable... in general - lol! ;) :) Such a wonderful contest offering for this extremely limited format! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls this evening! ;)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Yvette. Yeah, it's predictable but usually, give them crap like this and the votes come pouring in. I guess I'll just have to go look me up some inspirational quotes off the internet to sucker them in next time. LOL. I appreciate the gracious stars. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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LOL! Oh my goodness.... yes. :/ :/ :/
You enjoy the day out there!! ;) :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. I like the presentation. I love the topic you chose.... it. Sounds like you have a wonderful marriage.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Beautiful entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest. Good word count. I like the presentation. I love the topic you chose.... it. Sounds like you have a wonderful marriage.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Gypsy. Let me tell you congrats on the writer of the month. Well deserved. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this 6word poetic contest. It's amazing how difficult it is to remain married, but my wife and I have made it to 49 years, beautifully written and congratulations, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent entry in this 6word poetic contest. It's amazing how difficult it is to remain married, but my wife and I have made it to 49 years, beautifully written and congratulations, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Roy. Yes, she knows exactly how to keep me happy. Congrats on 49 years, friend.
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Thank you
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Yes!
My husband and I just celebrated 41 years of marriage, and "each day still anew."
The years have passed far too quickly, but we are healthy and even more in love than when we started out on this adventure.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Yes!
My husband and I just celebrated 41 years of marriage, and "each day still anew."
The years have passed far too quickly, but we are healthy and even more in love than when we started out on this adventure.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Diane. Yes, the years pass by far too quickly when life is filled with simple pleasures. Congrats on 41 years. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from Janet Foor
What a delightful picture to accompany your eight word poem for the contest.
I am so happy for you.
Very nicely done and good luck i n the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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What a delightful picture to accompany your eight word poem for the contest.
I am so happy for you.
Very nicely done and good luck i n the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Janet. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from lyenochka
I like how your title speaks of sunrise which is new and the first line speaks of fifty years of marriage which would seem to be not new but you show us that with loving commitment, each day is fresh and new! Best wishes in the contest. If autobiographical, Congratulations!!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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I like how your title speaks of sunrise which is new and the first line speaks of fifty years of marriage which would seem to be not new but you show us that with loving commitment, each day is fresh and new! Best wishes in the contest. If autobiographical, Congratulations!!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Helen. It's actually a little exaggerated on the years for the contest but still very true. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from zanya
It's wonderful to read a little praise, as per this short 8 word poem, for the much-maligned institution of marriage - a happy marriage is a blessing from on High, in my opinion!!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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It's wonderful to read a little praise, as per this short 8 word poem, for the much-maligned institution of marriage - a happy marriage is a blessing from on High, in my opinion!!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Zanya. Yes, I'm blessed every day. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from karenina
Fifty years! How few marriages last like this! I smile spontaneously at the spark that was never extinguished...though many a storm must have blown through in five decades. Rejoice! Love is eternal!--Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Fifty years! How few marriages last like this! I smile spontaneously at the spark that was never extinguished...though many a storm must have blown through in five decades. Rejoice! Love is eternal!--Karenina
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Karenina. The years were a little embellished for the contest. But decades of happiness have passed. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Embellishing for contests is an unwritten rule I think! (smile)----K
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Lol. Yes it is.
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Comment from Eternal Muse
A great message in this poem. Some marriages are that fortunate - and the two people feel like each day is still anew. Great picture of a happy couple, good descriptive imagery and visuals. You packed volumes in these 8 words. Good luck in the contest, I think it will do very well.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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A great message in this poem. Some marriages are that fortunate - and the two people feel like each day is still anew. Great picture of a happy couple, good descriptive imagery and visuals. You packed volumes in these 8 words. Good luck in the contest, I think it will do very well.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Yelena. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from Boogienights
wonderful! 50 years, that's an accomplisment. You must have met your soulmate, like my husband and I...40 years for us. Best of luck in the contest, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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wonderful! 50 years, that's an accomplisment. You must have met your soulmate, like my husband and I...40 years for us. Best of luck in the contest, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Boogie. I'll admit, 50 years was a bit exaggerated but I still can't wait to feel her loving touch every single day. Congrats on 40. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
