Compared to Sunrise
8 Word Poetry Contest Entry29 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Only eight words yet it sums up your happiness and gives your reader a happiness to
It also sums up your love and optimism.
Well done & Hope's for many more
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Only eight words yet it sums up your happiness and gives your reader a happiness to
It also sums up your love and optimism.
Well done & Hope's for many more
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Oh, I'm sure there will be many, many more. Yes, she brings out so much love in me. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments, Mary. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from LyndaS
Oh, my! This is quite a post, author. How lovely to rise each day with this image of fifty years of devotion for your loved one. It's very inspirational to see you take your relationship in hand and share it with us. You've done an amazing job with eight words. I wish you many more satisfying sunrises with your spouse in the future. Well done! Lynda
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Oh, my! This is quite a post, author. How lovely to rise each day with this image of fifty years of devotion for your loved one. It's very inspirational to see you take your relationship in hand and share it with us. You've done an amazing job with eight words. I wish you many more satisfying sunrises with your spouse in the future. Well done! Lynda
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Lynda. Yes, she brings me great enjoyment. I'm sure there will be many sunrises yet to come. She has me in the palm of her hand and treats me far too well. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments, Lynda. Thank you again.
Comment from Ric Myworld
People go through life searching for that special one, most settling for a substitute and any chance of happiness. It's always nice to know a few find the true meaning of joy. Thanks for sharing.
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People go through life searching for that special one, most settling for a substitute and any chance of happiness. It's always nice to know a few find the true meaning of joy. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Ric. Yes, so few have and hold onto each other. I really appreciate the generous stars. Have yourself a great weekend.
Comment from Oscar J. Perez
True love lasts and this is something all of us would love to have as well. Congrats on 50 years and may God bless you two with many more! Lovely poem to be written with 8 words. The picture...the title..it all goes together well.
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True love lasts and this is something all of us would love to have as well. Congrats on 50 years and may God bless you two with many more! Lovely poem to be written with 8 words. The picture...the title..it all goes together well.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Oscar. Yes, I'm sure there will be many more. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a sweet poem and sweet thought. You have certainly used your eight words to create a nice image. Your artwork really complements your message.
I had a little trouble with your word "anew." Can anew be used as an adjective? I think I would use a good adjective like surprising or maybe an alliterative one like scintillating or sparkling.
I think you have a winner here. I would change that last word though.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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What a sweet poem and sweet thought. You have certainly used your eight words to create a nice image. Your artwork really complements your message.
I had a little trouble with your word "anew." Can anew be used as an adjective? I think I would use a good adjective like surprising or maybe an alliterative one like scintillating or sparkling.
I think you have a winner here. I would change that last word though.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Debbie. I give that line some thought. Thanks for the suggestion. I'll run it by her and leave it in her hands and see what she says. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written eight-word poem about a marriage that lasts fifty years but every day is like a sunrise filled with promises of a perfect joyful day each morning.
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A very well-written eight-word poem about a marriage that lasts fifty years but every day is like a sunrise filled with promises of a perfect joyful day each morning.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Yes, every morning is a blessing. She's kept that promise alive and well for all these years. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image
and presentation.
-You have used
your eight words well
with a good topic and description.
-Fifty years is a great milestone,
especially when each day is
still special.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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-A good image
and presentation.
-You have used
your eight words well
with a good topic and description.
-Fifty years is a great milestone,
especially when each day is
still special.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Pam. Yes, every day is always special. We have a firm grip on our happiness and enjoy every minute. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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You are very welcome. I didn't know if the poem was biographical but assumed it was. I did enjoy the poem.
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To be honest, the years are a bit exaggerated but she still brings out the best in me. I'm sure when we do reach 50 years, it will still be the same.
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I won't tell anyone that the years are exaggerated! The thought is still the same.
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck with this "8 Word Poetry Contest" entry. Compared to a sunrise I guess the only thing that can compare is a forever love for each other. Best regards.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Best of luck with this "8 Word Poetry Contest" entry. Compared to a sunrise I guess the only thing that can compare is a forever love for each other. Best regards.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Kermit. Yes, I love what she does for me and hope it goes on forever. I really appreciate the stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Mimi Linny
What a lovely 8 Word Poetry piece for a Happy Golden Anniversary. I love the story line that each day of the 50 years is just like a new one... Nicely conceived - and wishing you the best in the contest!
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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What a lovely 8 Word Poetry piece for a Happy Golden Anniversary. I love the story line that each day of the 50 years is just like a new one... Nicely conceived - and wishing you the best in the contest!
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the gracious review, Mimi. Yes, life is wonderful with her. I dearly appreciate the kind comments and stars. I'm glad you liked my little tribute. I hope you have a great weekend.
