Hearts Entwined
5-7-5 Romance entry3 total reviews
Comment from Mimi Linny
An dorable 5-7-5 Poem about romance! The words are so adorably chosen and reflect the entwining of two to create one heart (and the artwork of the two entwined giraffes coming together, eye-to-eye, are a beautiful example)! Love it! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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An dorable 5-7-5 Poem about romance! The words are so adorably chosen and reflect the entwining of two to create one heart (and the artwork of the two entwined giraffes coming together, eye-to-eye, are a beautiful example)! Love it! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your sentiments!
Comment from lancellot
Well, hopefully, there is a bit more to that joy of engagement than only seeing eye to eye or there will be problems in the near future. This was a good poem and even seeing things the same way is nice. Your syllable count was correct.
Good luck in the contest.
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Well, hopefully, there is a bit more to that joy of engagement than only seeing eye to eye or there will be problems in the near future. This was a good poem and even seeing things the same way is nice. Your syllable count was correct.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A romantic eye-to-eye in 5-7-5. And I like the idea that the eye-to-eye honesty is more important than the ring when we talk of commitment and engagement. I liked it!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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A romantic eye-to-eye in 5-7-5. And I like the idea that the eye-to-eye honesty is more important than the ring when we talk of commitment and engagement. I liked it!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
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Welcome to the review.
