Dark History
Interview with Nazi a War prisoner24 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Beth, I liked this script a lot. What an inspirational story to convey about a period of time which to all of us stands for pure evil. And your notes just shows us how bad it was. She paid the ultimate price with her life. I hope you'll do well in the contest. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Hi Beth, I liked this script a lot. What an inspirational story to convey about a period of time which to all of us stands for pure evil. And your notes just shows us how bad it was. She paid the ultimate price with her life. I hope you'll do well in the contest. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much Ulla. I really appreciate the review and I'm glad you liked it. It was an evil time in history.
Beth
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Yes, it was bad beyond words. :)))
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! That is really scary! You did a super job telling us some eerie similarities with a certain leader now who loves large crowds, calls anything he doesn't like as fake news and so many Christians swallow camels of immorality because they hold dear a single issue which they think this leader will support.
Great job with the history and information in this!!
We have things your wouldn't believe- (you?)
deep seeded bigotry that (deep-seated)
https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/deep-seated-deep-seeded-usage
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Wow! That is really scary! You did a super job telling us some eerie similarities with a certain leader now who loves large crowds, calls anything he doesn't like as fake news and so many Christians swallow camels of immorality because they hold dear a single issue which they think this leader will support.
Great job with the history and information in this!!
We have things your wouldn't believe- (you?)
deep seeded bigotry that (deep-seated)
https://www.merriam-webster.com/words-at-play/deep-seated-deep-seeded-usage
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and the stars. Yes, the similarities are striking to today but I leave that up the reader. Thanks for noticing my errors. I love your script and wish more would join this.
Beth
Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
Fantastic read! I love history and very much enjoyed this! One small issue: "Fascist" would actually be lowercase, since it is mot actually the same fascism that Mussolini developed and propagated through his reign, but rather, a form of--so it would just be a lowercase version! Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Fantastic read! I love history and very much enjoyed this! One small issue: "Fascist" would actually be lowercase, since it is mot actually the same fascism that Mussolini developed and propagated through his reign, but rather, a form of--so it would just be a lowercase version! Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reviewing this and for your comments. I'm glad you pointed that out. I've changed it to lower case.
Beth
Comment from forestport12
This was powerful. I tend to think you found your greatest strength. You can writ pop-fiction and make it tense and gripping. You took me to a place that felt dangerous, but I didn't want to let go! Best work from you, for sure.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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This was powerful. I tend to think you found your greatest strength. You can writ pop-fiction and make it tense and gripping. You took me to a place that felt dangerous, but I didn't want to let go! Best work from you, for sure.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for a great review and comments. I'm glad you found it worthwhile. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
