The Sneeze
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Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous fifty-word story, The Sneeze, has the required word count and notes the improbable 9hopefully) situation that could only happen at your important supper party.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This humorous fifty-word story, The Sneeze, has the required word count and notes the improbable 9hopefully) situation that could only happen at your important supper party.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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thanks for your comments, Bill.
your picture is something else!
Katharine - pome lover
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry for the 50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt. It had my attention from beginning to end, and I chuckled at the humorous end. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This is a great entry for the 50 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt. It had my attention from beginning to end, and I chuckled at the humorous end. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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thank you so much!
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You're very welcome!
Comment from oliver818
Ha this is a very good entry for this competition. I like the way you create such an interesting scene here, it's really easy to imagine and funny. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Ha this is a very good entry for this competition. I like the way you create such an interesting scene here, it's really easy to imagine and funny. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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and thank you, Oliver, for a very kind review. It is much appreciated.
Comment from equestrik
This would be so funny and perhaps embarrassing but it sounds like it was a friendly get together and it was just funny. These days that sneeze might be considered a tragic event. :(
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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This would be so funny and perhaps embarrassing but it sounds like it was a friendly get together and it was just funny. These days that sneeze might be considered a tragic event. :(
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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or, like a lot of us who live here in allergy heaven, sneezing is par for the course.
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true!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, what a fun little contest entry. I believe this could happen or something similar. You did a good job with your words. Your lines read well to tell this embarrassing incident.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Haha, what a fun little contest entry. I believe this could happen or something similar. You did a good job with your words. Your lines read well to tell this embarrassing incident.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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thanks, Jan. I appreciate your comments. Am thankful that it's fiction.
Comment from yespabee
Good one. The nose, eyes and ears - all in play. Nose is the offender, eyes are the victim and ears are the spectator. Good catch of the happening in merely 50 words. The story without story. Indeed, enjoyable.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Good one. The nose, eyes and ears - all in play. Nose is the offender, eyes are the victim and ears are the spectator. Good catch of the happening in merely 50 words. The story without story. Indeed, enjoyable.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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thank you kindly. What a unique observation- clever!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We all have embarrassing moments, but this one is inventive and made me laugh! Those false eyelashes never stay put and this one went on a journey of discovery! Ha ha ha, a fun write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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We all have embarrassing moments, but this one is inventive and made me laugh! Those false eyelashes never stay put and this one went on a journey of discovery! Ha ha ha, a fun write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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thanks, Dolly!
I like your new picture.
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Thank you x
