Slow Rainfall
Tetractys poetry15 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image; it
looks very relaxing.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and imagery.
-You create a vivid word picture
of this rainy day.
-I like your concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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-Very nice image; it
looks very relaxing.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and imagery.
-You create a vivid word picture
of this rainy day.
-I like your concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much Pam. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from RodG
The Speaker and I share an affinity for thunderstorms without wind and where the rain falls gently. His attitude is nicely expressed in this short five-line poem. Rod
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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The Speaker and I share an affinity for thunderstorms without wind and where the rain falls gently. His attitude is nicely expressed in this short five-line poem. Rod
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you Rod!
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Thank you Rod!
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Thank you Rod!
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Thank you Rod!
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Thank you Rod!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Nicely done. Nothing quite like the sound of raindrops on your window. Very calming. I like this description Slow rainfall entrances me as I sit. Savouring the mellow sounds of Thunder. Beautiful.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Nicely done. Nothing quite like the sound of raindrops on your window. Very calming. I like this description Slow rainfall entrances me as I sit. Savouring the mellow sounds of Thunder. Beautiful.
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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Your welcome
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem sets the scene nicely within its syllable limitations and the photo looks very relaxing as a suitable accompaniment. (Personally, however, rainfall and thunder make me very anxious, having been subject to flooding from time to time!)
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Your poem sets the scene nicely within its syllable limitations and the photo looks very relaxing as a suitable accompaniment. (Personally, however, rainfall and thunder make me very anxious, having been subject to flooding from time to time!)
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Hi Lisa... thanks for the review. I love the rain and thunder and will stop and become very still while listening! :). Sorry you think of flooding.
Comment from AnnieDawn
A perfect syllable count and every word makes sense in the order that they are written. This deserves a six star review and I don't give out many. I loved reading it and to tell the truth read it over several times as it has brought back many memories of the storms that I sat through. Great job.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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A perfect syllable count and every word makes sense in the order that they are written. This deserves a six star review and I don't give out many. I loved reading it and to tell the truth read it over several times as it has brought back many memories of the storms that I sat through. Great job.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
