Prayers for Fanstory Family
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "My Precious Son"Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians
32 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful artwork and
presentation to go with it, Jan.
-I am deeply saddened by this news.
-I didn't have any idea.
-I will be adding to the book
when I get a chance. Thank you
for doing it.
-You wrote a heartfelt poem for her,
and I know it means a lot, as well.
-I can't imagine what she is going through.
-The conclusion expresses thoughts
of comfort for Yvonne, and others in
a similar situation.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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-Beautiful artwork and
presentation to go with it, Jan.
-I am deeply saddened by this news.
-I didn't have any idea.
-I will be adding to the book
when I get a chance. Thank you
for doing it.
-You wrote a heartfelt poem for her,
and I know it means a lot, as well.
-I can't imagine what she is going through.
-The conclusion expresses thoughts
of comfort for Yvonne, and others in
a similar situation.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Pam, for your detailed comments and 6 star rating. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
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You are very welcome and deserving, Jan.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, My Precious Son, may very well be for Yvonne as I heard she has lost her son. This verse would, of course find a target for anyone's loss of a child. It is well done.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This poem, My Precious Son, may very well be for Yvonne as I heard she has lost her son. This verse would, of course find a target for anyone's loss of a child. It is well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your great review. I appreciate your time.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Sally Law
Exceptionally beautiful and heartfelt. Our faith in Christ makes our losses bearable in the truth of life eternal. I will be joining this book as soon as possible, dear Jan. May God give you comfort and peace today and always,
Sally XOs.....xo....
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Exceptionally beautiful and heartfelt. Our faith in Christ makes our losses bearable in the truth of life eternal. I will be joining this book as soon as possible, dear Jan. May God give you comfort and peace today and always,
Sally XOs.....xo....
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Sally, for your great review and 6 star rating. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
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You are welcome. I joined this marvelous book and so glad that I did.
Sal xos....
Comment from Ben Colder
I understand this write. It is not easy losing a son. I know this by experience as well. Though we draw strength from our Lord and knowing we all will meet again, the memories are still there. Christ is so gracious to fill the gap.
Blessing coming your way.
Stay strong for the sake of you and the others.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I understand this write. It is not easy losing a son. I know this by experience as well. Though we draw strength from our Lord and knowing we all will meet again, the memories are still there. Christ is so gracious to fill the gap.
Blessing coming your way.
Stay strong for the sake of you and the others.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your time reading and reviewing and the 6 star rating. All are appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very well constructed spiritual poem with perfect rhyme, flow, meter and cadence. I wasn't sure who you described as "son" in the first verse, but if this indeed a child you talked about, please accept my condolences. However, if I misunderstood, I apologize most profusely.
Maybe it's just me, but I am not in favor of apostrophizing a word unless there is no other solution can be found.
I am referring to these two lines:
In rev'rent silence, Angels came,
my life will never be the same.
Perhaps, "rev'rent" can be substituted with "sacred"? Just a thought.
A beautiful poem with a gorgeous artistic presentation and artwork.
Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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A very well constructed spiritual poem with perfect rhyme, flow, meter and cadence. I wasn't sure who you described as "son" in the first verse, but if this indeed a child you talked about, please accept my condolences. However, if I misunderstood, I apologize most profusely.
Maybe it's just me, but I am not in favor of apostrophizing a word unless there is no other solution can be found.
I am referring to these two lines:
In rev'rent silence, Angels came,
my life will never be the same.
Perhaps, "rev'rent" can be substituted with "sacred"? Just a thought.
A beautiful poem with a gorgeous artistic presentation and artwork.
Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, EM, for your great review and comments Respectfully, Janand great suggestion which I used.
Comment from AnnieDawn
This is such a beautiful post. It is so difficult to lose a child no matter the age. We are supposed to go before them and the hole in our lives can not be filled. For some reason losing a child is more difficult than losing any other member of the family, You have penned a beautiful tribute. Very well done.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This is such a beautiful post. It is so difficult to lose a child no matter the age. We are supposed to go before them and the hole in our lives can not be filled. For some reason losing a child is more difficult than losing any other member of the family, You have penned a beautiful tribute. Very well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Annie, for your great review. I appreciate your time.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from oliver818
What a terribly sad poem, if this is true it must be a terrible thing to go through. It's very evocative and touching. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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What a terribly sad poem, if this is true it must be a terrible thing to go through. It's very evocative and touching. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thankk you for tking time to read & review. Much appreciative of both.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I've just read Helen's post, I didn't know. Your poem is so heart wrenching, Jan, I cannot bear to think of how Yvonne is feeling at the moment, and in the future. The best are always taken from us, while the evil are left to continue to destroy. It's not fair. This is a lovely poem, so sincere, and so comforting. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I've just read Helen's post, I didn't know. Your poem is so heart wrenching, Jan, I cannot bear to think of how Yvonne is feeling at the moment, and in the future. The best are always taken from us, while the evil are left to continue to destroy. It's not fair. This is a lovely poem, so sincere, and so comforting. Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, for your great review and comments. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you chose to go with your poem , they are a prefect match You captured my attention from the first word to the last. they touted my heart and soul
What a uplifting message for a Sunday
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I love the artwork you chose to go with your poem , they are a prefect match You captured my attention from the first word to the last. they touted my heart and soul
What a uplifting message for a Sunday
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Miss Cookie, for your awesome 6 star rating. I appreciate your time.
Respectfully, Jan
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It was my pleasure
Cookie
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely words of comfort--I just learned of this devastating event today from Helen's post--glad I clicked on this--I'd been about to sign off at 2:09 a.m. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Lovely words of comfort--I just learned of this devastating event today from Helen's post--glad I clicked on this--I'd been about to sign off at 2:09 a.m. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Liz, for dropping by to read & review. Both much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
