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Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians

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Comment from fm wright
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This poem really touches the heart. It is written in a sensitive manner, as well as giving words of comfort. Thanks for sharing it, along with the artwork and video.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much for the tender review and generous stars. This means so much to me. It took me all day to write this and I'm so glad it worked out, and that it was a blessing to you and the many. Thank you again for your kindness, Faye dear.
    Sending my best today as always,
    Sally XOs.....xo......
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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First condolences on your loss
But a joyous welcome to your precious Sophia.
I found your poem both consoling to those who may have suffered loss and to give the hope.
Very well done

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind comments, dear Mary. How sweet of you and comforting. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xos.....
Comment from Sankey
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AMEN Sis I know this is a comfort to those who grieve. Wonderful thing is these little ones are now with our Saviour and hopefully the ones who have lost her will see her again if they are His own. I believe all little ones go to be with our Saviour in death as youngsters. Loved the picture as well.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, dear Geoff. I believe the same and know we will see our little granddaughter in God's kingdom. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs......
Comment from equestrik
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This write is so full of sadness. For the loss of your sweet granddaughter and for the loss of a friend's son. I do also love that there is hope here as in the middle of sadness, life does go forward and more happiness comes as well.

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the tender review and kind comments. It is so appreciated and needed. Sending you my best today,
    Sally XOs....
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is lovely to play after reading your poem. Isn't it wonderful we don't have to fancy up internally, spiritually or externally before we present ourselves before the Lord. This is a lovely tribute to all who have passed from our human arms to the Creator's, with room for all of us. Very nicely expressed. I am sorry for the losses experienced referred to in this poem.

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review and tender comments. I appreciate you so much. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xos....