Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is a rather lovely and tender piece, dedicated to a very brave lady who, in the midst of coping with her sad loss, continues to undertake the duties she has volunteered for as far as thus site is concerned. She continues to administer the clubs for which she is responsible, concerned as ever not to let those who rely on her down. Thank you for supporting her in this way

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about this poem for Yvonne, and supporting her in her loss. It is the least any of us can do for something going through this difficult time. She is a good friend to many of us here.

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This was such a lighthearted spiritual poem, it brightened my day. You found great words and I liked your artistic imagery and artwork. Autumn is my favorite season.

But leaves in autumn will render

Our memories soft and tender.

Beautifully done.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the poem, imagery, and artwork, and sharing the lines you particularly liked.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

I just love how positive this poem is, it just lifted my spirits. I love the way you put it together and the colors you used. Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Boogienights. I appreciate your comments about this positive poem, and I am glad it lifted your spirits, and that you liked the presentation.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your heartfelt poem is beautiful, Pam. I love the image, the rhymes, and the meaningful words you chose. Your lines read smoothly with great emotion.
Thank you for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Jan. I appreciate your comments about the poem, image, and rhyme, as well as meaningful words. It means a lot. I hope you are doing okay, too.

Comment from Tina Crute

Exceptional

This is beautiful in every way...the deep meaning and imagery, the rhyming and the format as a whole. This reminds me of the perfect sympathy greeting card we always look for at the store, when someone has a sorrow. I would buy this card.
Lovely poem for a lovely person. This is sure to touch Yvonne's heart:)
Tina

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Tina. I appreciate all of your comments and am glad you found the poem beautiful with deep meaning and imagery. I also appreciate the sympathy card comparison and that you would buy it. It took me a while to write something because it is hard to do these emotional tributes.

reply by Tina Crute on 23-Sep-2020

It flows so well that I would never have guessed it was difficult to compose. That's what makes a professional. They(you) make it look easy:)
Tina

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020

The poem itself wasn't difficult; it was finding the right words to say for the situation. Words never seem to be enough sometimes.

Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

What a beautiful poem, Pam. I'm sure it will mean a lot to Yvonne. I had no idea of her tragic loss, not having spent much time on FS recently. We're up in Queensland celebrating our grandson's first birthday.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Tony. I appreciate your comments about the poem meaning a lot to Yvonne. Hope to see you back on FS soon. What a special birthday, too! Save me some cake:)

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

Pam my friend, so sublime of you to write for Yvonne and her family; a meaningful poem in sincere phrases and full of love, thank you.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, ameen. I appreciate your comments about the poem being sincere and full of love.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Pam,
What a lovely poem for Yvonne and her family.
I cannot fathom the grief one experiences when losing a child, but you have expressed emotions which resonate deeply with me, and I surely know they will resonate with Yvonne and her family...

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, diane. I appreciate your comments, and cannot fathom this situation, either. I am glad the words resonated with you, and I'm sure this and others being written will offer her comfort, as well.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A positive message of tenderness and understanding here send to Yvonne in her hour of need and this is a joy to read Pam, a fine presentation, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Dolly. I appreciate your comments about the positive message with understanding and a good presentation, too.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

"The gift of love will over flow" is a wonderful use of words that is smooth and is fitting for the end of your words. I also like how the Autumn leaves are an image of heaven. Your poem gives comfort in a time of sadness.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Elaine. I appreciate you sharing the parts of the poem that resonated with you. It is not easy to write these kinds of poems when someone has experienced a great loss. I appreciate your comment about adding comfort, too. It is the least we can do.