Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am sure Yvonne and her family are touched my your poem. I know I was. Thank you for sharing such a tender poem for a FS friend. Your poem is very emotional and extremely well written. Thank you so muc for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Barbara. I appreciate your comments about being touched by the poem and that it was also tender for a special FS friend. It is not easy to write these kinds of poems.

Comment from F. William Lester

Excellent

Very nice. I like the theme and the inspiration behind the words. I have no suggestions for change or improvement as poetry is not my strength. I enjoy reading it here on FanStory to see what others write and maybe give it a try. Thanks for the read. Good luck. Good writing and stay well.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, F.William. I appreciate your comments about the theme and inspiration. You take care and be well, too.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you so much for this beautiful poem, Pam! Yes, the brighter light is ahead of us beyond this sorrow-plagued life. We can focus on the Joy and Love with all our loved ones in Heaven.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Helen. I appreciate your comments about the poem being beautiful, and the brighter light beyond a "sorrow-plagued life." It is not easy to write these kinds of poems.

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Well said writer. The gift of love is above all gifts offered by our Heavenly Father. Because He say, God is love, he that loves not does not know God.
My compliments to you for sharing the greatest gift .

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Ben. I appreciate your comments about the gift of love and sharing the poem about it.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for your tribute to Yvonne and her family--there can be nothing worse than the loss of one's child. I admired your rhymes and reinforcing picture. Here's to "The Gift of Love".

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Joan. I appreciate your comments about the tribute, rhyme, and picture. I agree with you about losing a child; it has to be very difficult.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes indeed, when we dwell in places below the level of the hills, our minds are filled with dust and not the cleansing waterfalls that pour from mountain tops,
beautifully written and sensitively penned to embrace with hope, Well done Pam, thoughtfully and compassionately rendered. Blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Roy. I appreciate your comments about the poem showing sensitivity, hope, and compassion. That is the least we can do for those who are in need of it.

reply by royowen on 25-Sep-2020

Absolutely

Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to do with your poem, Ii captured my attention from the start
what a wonderful feeling to feel that way. thank you for sharing.l
Cookie

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thanks for the review, Cookie. I appreciate your comments about the artwork and feelings in the poem.

reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 25-Sep-2020

Your very welcome.
Cookie