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Wedding Chronicles #2

Burt and Ali

27 total reviews 
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Sally, I like how you tell us day by day what happened to Burt and Ali getting ready for their wedding day. Smiles to this-
I love you, Ali Landers.
"There was love all around
But I never heard it singing
No, I never heard it at all
Till there was you...."

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending my best today as always, Sally. XOs.....xo...
reply by Gert sherwood on 01-Oct-2020
    You are welcome Sally Law.
    Gert
Comment from BethShelby
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You've created a very romantic story here. The likelihood of this happening seem remote but stranger things have happened. The book Strangers on a Train show that she knew who he was before he realized who she was. I really enjoyed this well-written story.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the wonderful review and kind comments, dear Beth. I?m delighted that you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Exceptional
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This is a wonderfully romantic wedding chronicle. I was glued from the first paragraph to the very last. The videos are perfect for this story.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the beautiful review and generous stars, dear Rebecca. I?m deeply honored and blessed. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally XOs....xo...
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 01-Oct-2020
    You're welcome!
Comment from Cindy Decker
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Sally, this was such a bittersweet story; I know you relegate it to fiction, but I believe this story could be non fiction. The pair had a lasting love for each other that was truly special. I was so glad the couple "found@ each other again.
Exceptional work, Sally.
Best wishes! Good luck in your contest!!
Cindy

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    Dear Cindy, you have bled me from head to toe. Thank you for the lovely review and kind comments. I?m delighted that you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...xo...
Comment from Pen & Paper
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Then there was music and wonderful roses
They tell me in sweet fragrant meadows
Of dawn and dew

Touched my heart, fellow writer!
Keep writing. Cheers!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind comments, dear one. It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from oliver818
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This is a nice story, I enjoyed reading it because the characters come across well and have interesting personalities that contribute to the development of the story. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    Dear Oliver, thank you for the wonderful review and kind comments. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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You have a good story or chronicles for us to read. I'm not sure how things are going from her on but I am in for the long ride/read. I am sure it will be well worth it. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2020
    To say that I?m behind is an understatement. Thank you for the wonderful review and kind comments, dear Barbara. I appreciate you so much.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs....