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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is an interesting entry. It has one end rhyme with smoking/joking, so I would say it is kind of a prose poem, but it reads more like prose overall. It does have a pun on which most of the action turns. It is the kind of composition I think would work well at a campaign to help fight underage smoking. Nice read.
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This is an interesting entry. It has one end rhyme with smoking/joking, so I would say it is kind of a prose poem, but it reads more like prose overall. It does have a pun on which most of the action turns. It is the kind of composition I think would work well at a campaign to help fight underage smoking. Nice read.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from tempeste
This is a theme particularly dear to me..
Those that smoke are poisoning their body and polluting the air around them hence causing harm to those standing near them.
I don't understand why it is still legal to smoke..
It's a serious issue but I do appreciate your fun way to discuss it ...my favourite verse :
"Between Dad and the heat from his ping pong paddle
I could light a cigarette with my bottom. "
I'm splitting hairs here Rhonnie ...
Ping pong BAT.....light cigarettes with my BUTT
The inside story teaches us that our bad actions return to bite us in our butt..I love the law of karma ( biggrin)
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This is a theme particularly dear to me..
Those that smoke are poisoning their body and polluting the air around them hence causing harm to those standing near them.
I don't understand why it is still legal to smoke..
It's a serious issue but I do appreciate your fun way to discuss it ...my favourite verse :
"Between Dad and the heat from his ping pong paddle
I could light a cigarette with my bottom. "
I'm splitting hairs here Rhonnie ...
Ping pong BAT.....light cigarettes with my BUTT
The inside story teaches us that our bad actions return to bite us in our butt..I love the law of karma ( biggrin)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
Comment from Cindy Decker
Rhonnie,
This is a humorous story about a serious subject: smoking.
I had five aunts who smoked, all of them but 1 quit and most lived long lives then.
I hope your message influences kids and teens to never start smoking, as they will be a lot healthier.
Your poem is so entertaining, it really gets the point across.
Excellent work,
Ronnie
Cindy
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Rhonnie,
This is a humorous story about a serious subject: smoking.
I had five aunts who smoked, all of them but 1 quit and most lived long lives then.
I hope your message influences kids and teens to never start smoking, as they will be a lot healthier.
Your poem is so entertaining, it really gets the point across.
Excellent work,
Ronnie
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, that is certainly a unique approach to this contest - gotta love originality... perhaps the shock value is what it would take... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Well, that is certainly a unique approach to this contest - gotta love originality... perhaps the shock value is what it would take... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Humorist,
hahahahaha Serves her right, doesn't it? Little smartie. Yep - we allllll have to be humbled a little from time to time. And having our own words tossed back in our faces is a great way to do it.
This makes a great entry for the pun contest. Good luck~
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Dear Mystery Humorist,
hahahahaha Serves her right, doesn't it? Little smartie. Yep - we allllll have to be humbled a little from time to time. And having our own words tossed back in our faces is a great way to do it.
This makes a great entry for the pun contest. Good luck~
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
