Hurting Heart
Truthful leadership is needed.4 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I am totally in agreement with your observation. How terribly sad that so many people are expressing these feelings. Rebellion and mutiny do not happen under good leadership and respected moral guidance. We shall hope and pray for a change after November.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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I am totally in agreement with your observation. How terribly sad that so many people are expressing these feelings. Rebellion and mutiny do not happen under good leadership and respected moral guidance. We shall hope and pray for a change after November.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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I cannot agree more with you. Thanks for the read and review. Let's pray November brings good news.
Comment from roof35
This is well said. You followed the rules and penned an excellent Senryu for the contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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This is well said. You followed the rules and penned an excellent Senryu for the contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the read and the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from lancellot
I wonder when the country wasn't divided? It seemed to be for as long as I remember. Sometimes we openly talked about, usually every three and half years, other times we ignored it or stayed in our lanes, segregated communities or groups.
Interesting poem.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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I wonder when the country wasn't divided? It seemed to be for as long as I remember. Sometimes we openly talked about, usually every three and half years, other times we ignored it or stayed in our lanes, segregated communities or groups.
Interesting poem.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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You are correct, we are a two party system, leading to differences in ideology and policy, but today it is accompanied by anger and hatred inspired by a leader who cares more about himself then the country.
Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent senryu for the contest
on the reality of politics in our country and many others too.
Division is the theme of this administration.
Sadly, many follow along.
Best wishes to you and the country.
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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You've written an excellent senryu for the contest
on the reality of politics in our country and many others too.
Division is the theme of this administration.
Sadly, many follow along.
Best wishes to you and the country.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your read and review. And thank you for your good wishes. We need all the help we can get.
