Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I like your sentence. It is catchy in its own way. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Raul. I enjoyed the challenge.
God bless
Steve

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A creative and clever play on words in this delightful 6 word poem.
Perfect picture For the well written piece.

One note - check spelling of title

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Janet for catching the title debacle. Thank you for the awesome review as well.
God bless
Steve

Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson

Excellent

I must say you did a wonderful job with this poem with so few words.
You captured my attention from the star, the photo is so beautiful
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
stay safe and be blessed
Cookie

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Cookie for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve

Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

Hi Neonewman! I really like your poem! Is there any way you can correct the typo in your poems' title? From Evition to Eviction?
I love the way you've metaphorical referred to the falling leaves as "summer's eviction" - very clever!
Susan

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Susan for the awesome review. Title corrected, thank you for catching this.
God bless
Steve

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry. I like how you used the word 'fall' as in leaves falling but also allude to the Fall season. I like how your personified Summer and leaves. Check the spelling in the title. Your image is beautiful. Perhaps make the font a bit larger--your choice.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Jan. I enjoyed the challenge this one brought. Thank you for catching the title issue.
God bless
Steve

Comment from Jodie Hammerstein

Excellent

Wow so much to take from that, it's inspiring thankyou. The picture was a great choice. It all ties into the poem, even the one big tree by itself it's like it's awaiting its fate.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Jodie for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This 6 word poem speaks the kingly approach through falling of leaves to the poor summer to cause eviction from the kingdom; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you for the awesome review, Alcreator. Loved the challenge this one presented.
God bless
Steve

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

Wow, this poem its winner, I kove it it's perfect. Poor summer evicted by the aristocratic fall. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Iza for this exceptional review. What an inspiration the six stars present.
God bless
Steve

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Your word eviction at the top is missing the[ c], Steve. The poem tells the story well. What a beautiful carpet the tree laid down for midnight snacks and a blanket of comfort for many unknown creatures. Well done my friend. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Thank you, Nancy for the excellent review and for catching the missing "c". I love the thoughts you've shared on the leaves blanketing the creatures below.
God bless
Steve

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! Such a fun perspective on the changing of the seasons here! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Be sure to pop back in and correct the spelling of your title... ;) :)

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020

Typo corrected, thank you for that. Thank you for the awesome review as well.
God bless
Steve