Autumn seduces
5-7-5 contest entry44 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Not bad. You sure like being naughty. I just had a flash. Sometime in the future I was meeting you at the airport. We had never met face to face. It was at least a year from now, because i had lost the weight i wanted to, Got my hair cut, and had my teeth fixed, all on my list. We had a general idea of what we each looked like. So, I go up to this guy I think is you and plant one on him. He looks at me in shock. I say you aren't Steve are you? He said no, but can we pretend again? You walk up and we hug, and you say, pretend you don't know me, I'd like a kiss too. :-)
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Not bad. You sure like being naughty. I just had a flash. Sometime in the future I was meeting you at the airport. We had never met face to face. It was at least a year from now, because i had lost the weight i wanted to, Got my hair cut, and had my teeth fixed, all on my list. We had a general idea of what we each looked like. So, I go up to this guy I think is you and plant one on him. He looks at me in shock. I say you aren't Steve are you? He said no, but can we pretend again? You walk up and we hug, and you say, pretend you don't know me, I'd like a kiss too. :-)
Comment Written 12-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2024
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Lol, your imagination has no limits.
Thank you again for all the wonderful reviews.
Happy Birthday again, before the day is over.
God bless,
Steve
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:-)
Comment from tempeste
Ciao , I had some time yesterday so I went through your portfolio( you have only 6 pages) .
You have many beautiful seasonal entries.
Autumn seduces me
I love, I adore Autumn , can't understand why people find it so droll and depressing.
The warm , vivid hues, the tastes ( it's harvest time, grapes, apples chestnuts, mushrooms, etc)
Sounds whispering winds, ( you mentioned it in one of your poems)
This poem stood out but there are other nature 5-7-5 that deserve a six too.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Ciao , I had some time yesterday so I went through your portfolio( you have only 6 pages) .
You have many beautiful seasonal entries.
Autumn seduces me
I love, I adore Autumn , can't understand why people find it so droll and depressing.
The warm , vivid hues, the tastes ( it's harvest time, grapes, apples chestnuts, mushrooms, etc)
Sounds whispering winds, ( you mentioned it in one of your poems)
This poem stood out but there are other nature 5-7-5 that deserve a six too.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Tempeste, for this exceptional review, my friend, and for taking the time to look at my past work. I Love Autumn; it's my favorite time of the year.
God bless,
Steve
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My pleasure! 🍁
Comment from sunnilicious
Great artwork choice and an even better poem. Good visual imagery created. Nice alliteration with seduces-summer-submission. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Great artwork choice and an even better poem. Good visual imagery created. Nice alliteration with seduces-summer-submission. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This piece was back in 2020. I haven't been on in some time now. Kind of trying to inch my way back in lol.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Ode to Autumn writing prompt.
This short verse puts a different slant on Autumn, seducing summer.
Nicely done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Ode to Autumn writing prompt.
This short verse puts a different slant on Autumn, seducing summer.
Nicely done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review, Sharon.
God bless
Steve
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the 5-7-5 Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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This is a fine thought for the 5-7-5 Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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I agree, Thank you for the awesome review.
God bless
Steve
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Ode to Autumn poem you penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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This is a very well written Ode to Autumn poem you penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Teri.
God bless!
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you are so welcome, May God bless you too! Teri
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Great personification of Summer and Autumn, Mystery Writer. Your words are filled with imagery--I could see this scene as I read it. Your image is perfect to pair with your well-thought out words.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Great personification of Summer and Autumn, Mystery Writer. Your words are filled with imagery--I could see this scene as I read it. Your image is perfect to pair with your well-thought out words.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Jan. Always enjoy your reviews.
God bless!
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, this poem, and particularly the picture that came with it, has seduced me. (that's for sure)
Both compliment each other, and are offered free to anyone who takes the time to review unknown authors.
I am glad I did.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Dear Author, this poem, and particularly the picture that came with it, has seduced me. (that's for sure)
Both compliment each other, and are offered free to anyone who takes the time to review unknown authors.
I am glad I did.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Awesome review, Suzanna. Thank you~
God bless!
Comment from flylikeaneagle
PenPal: great visual of autumn being naked. Our leaves are falling from the wind. The yard is filled with gold leaves. I like your poem and it makes one think. I'm sure you will win flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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PenPal: great visual of autumn being naked. Our leaves are falling from the wind. The yard is filled with gold leaves. I like your poem and it makes one think. I'm sure you will win flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Wow! Thank you for the stunning sixer, my friend as well as the inspiring support.
God bless!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Autumn seduces
Hello, Anonymous,
Great entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt contest. It's funny in a way...nudity exposed...as the trees lose their leaves. Great satori.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Autumn seduces
Hello, Anonymous,
Great entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt contest. It's funny in a way...nudity exposed...as the trees lose their leaves. Great satori.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy. Always enjoy your work as well.
God bless!