rustling in the breeze
A 5-7-5- poem about Autumn4 total reviews
Comment from Valerie Fish
A lovely metaphor, particularly liked the onomatopoeic rustling and the russet alliteration, this paints a vivid picture.
A deserved joint second place, well done.
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A lovely metaphor, particularly liked the onomatopoeic rustling and the russet alliteration, this paints a vivid picture.
A deserved joint second place, well done.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author of you 5-7-5- poem about Autumn
rustling in the breeze.
smiles to the brilliant graphic of the colorful leave and you 5-7-5 words smiles to you. The best to you in this contest.
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Hello unknown author of you 5-7-5- poem about Autumn
rustling in the breeze.
smiles to the brilliant graphic of the colorful leave and you 5-7-5 words smiles to you. The best to you in this contest.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from donette1914
such a beautiful write
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure
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such a beautiful write
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
Comment from Ben B.
This is a very lovely poem, a perfect ode to the best season of the year. You even matched the color scheme to give us a feel for the leaves. Good luck with your contest there.
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This is a very lovely poem, a perfect ode to the best season of the year. You even matched the color scheme to give us a feel for the leaves. Good luck with your contest there.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
