Dance Hall Daze
Get lost in the colorful rhythm...22 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
What a lovely and powerful metaphor for Autumn and the way she drives leaves (and people) into doing a different form of dance. This was fun - good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
What a lovely and powerful metaphor for Autumn and the way she drives leaves (and people) into doing a different form of dance. This was fun - good luck!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much, Robyn!!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Ah I like the way you presented you contest poem with how the way the season of dancing in the the cool air with the brings out the fever of the dancer
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Ah I like the way you presented you contest poem with how the way the season of dancing in the the cool air with the brings out the fever of the dancer
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much, Gert!
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You are welcome
how did you know my name I hope that I accidentally gave my name.
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Your name is on your profile picture that appears with all of your reviews. ;-)
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Really, I don't have a picture of me along with my profile or portifilo?
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Your name's there...
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Well you are right my name is there in plain sight.
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of personification of autumn and alliteration (feel-fever; clad cool) and assonance (cool, hues) in your brief poem. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Great use of personification of autumn and alliteration (feel-fever; clad cool) and assonance (cool, hues) in your brief poem. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Ode to Autumn writing prompt.
This tells of Autumn sashaying in a colorful verse.
Nicely done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Ode to Autumn writing prompt.
This tells of Autumn sashaying in a colorful verse.
Nicely done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the 5-7-5 Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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This is a fine thought for the 5-7-5 Poem entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!
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You're very welcome!
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You're very welcome!
Comment from trimple
Hello there
You have painted in poetry a splendid 5=7=5= ode to autumn which expresses vibrancy, movement and colour.
My only thought was that your first line ends with 'in' when perhaps you could have written instead--
Autumnul sashays
clad in cool and vibrant hues...
feel her dance fever!
but hey... it ain't my poem... just saying.
Nonetheless... I think this is the one to hit the top spot :)
Very lovely ode to autumn and I wish you luck in the contest.
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Hello there
You have painted in poetry a splendid 5=7=5= ode to autumn which expresses vibrancy, movement and colour.
My only thought was that your first line ends with 'in' when perhaps you could have written instead--
Autumnul sashays
clad in cool and vibrant hues...
feel her dance fever!
but hey... it ain't my poem... just saying.
Nonetheless... I think this is the one to hit the top spot :)
Very lovely ode to autumn and I wish you luck in the contest.
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A verywell-written autumn ode with her vibrant colors performing a feverish dance in celebration of the season and cooler breezes after the hot summer days.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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A verywell-written autumn ode with her vibrant colors performing a feverish dance in celebration of the season and cooler breezes after the hot summer days.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Sally Law
I always imagine Autumn as a woman in a dress of gold and red leaves. Superb short verse poem for for the entry, mystery poet. Lovely illustration to crown your fine work. Six golden stars for you today.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I always imagine Autumn as a woman in a dress of gold and red leaves. Superb short verse poem for for the entry, mystery poet. Lovely illustration to crown your fine work. Six golden stars for you today.
Sal xo
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Oh my goodness - what a lovely surprise this morning! Thank you so very much for both the excellent comments and those bright stars - a welcome bright spark around here! May you have a marvelous Sunday out there!
Comment from sammielwf
May Autumn dance with a cool color palate to draw readers to your poem.
I enjoyed the brevity and the heat of it.
Great job and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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May Autumn dance with a cool color palate to draw readers to your poem.
I enjoyed the brevity and the heat of it.
Great job and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, yes! Can't you just see the changes, the tango has got to be Autumns dance! Bright, fast and sassy. You have really written an excellent Ode to Autumn, it's my favourite season. Not too hot, and not too cold, but so colourful! Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Oh, yes! Can't you just see the changes, the tango has got to be Autumns dance! Bright, fast and sassy. You have really written an excellent Ode to Autumn, it's my favourite season. Not too hot, and not too cold, but so colourful! Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks so very much... cha cha cha!!
