Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Sister's "Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings
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Comment from Mia Twysted
It is lovely to think of that sisterly bond. I myself only have a brother and always wanted to have a sister so I could share my secrets with her. You make me feel like I am missing out.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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It is lovely to think of that sisterly bond. I myself only have a brother and always wanted to have a sister so I could share my secrets with her. You make me feel like I am missing out.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I'm Sorry about that but share that feeling listening to my wife talk to my sister and hers on a 3 way line.
Oddly they bonded more than me and my younger brother's have.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
I do like the words and the rhyme you've used on your cinquain - great job! ;) I would suggest, however, that the overuse of capitalization in this short form takes away from both your presentation and your message with distraction as well as contemplation for the reader as to the reasoning for each (usually capitalization in short form is sparingly or never used unless emphasis is called for)... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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I do like the words and the rhyme you've used on your cinquain - great job! ;) I would suggest, however, that the overuse of capitalization in this short form takes away from both your presentation and your message with distraction as well as contemplation for the reader as to the reasoning for each (usually capitalization in short form is sparingly or never used unless emphasis is called for)... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the Time to Read and Review this poem offering and the Continued Support. I'm still struggling to break my capitalization habit, LOL. Blessings