She Was Off Key
5-7-5 Epitaph for a Rival contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from Valerie Fish
Very clever, and funny, not the first B Flat joke I've seen but perfect in this instance. Good title, and powerful picture, the silhouette works well.
A worthy second place winner. Well Done
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Very clever, and funny, not the first B Flat joke I've seen but perfect in this instance. Good title, and powerful picture, the silhouette works well.
A worthy second place winner. Well Done
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars, Valerie. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from palmart
Good comparison considering a duet with a dead person and the musical comparison with the B-flat (I considered it as a comparison with the least value, at least musically thinking. Picture with silhouettes like those reflects a great vision.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Good comparison considering a duet with a dead person and the musical comparison with the B-flat (I considered it as a comparison with the least value, at least musically thinking. Picture with silhouettes like those reflects a great vision.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Palmart. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
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You´re very welcome, Ron!! Have a nice time!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! What a fun play on the musical terms to make your reader smile!! ;) A great offering for this unusual contest, Mystery Author - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls!! ;)
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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LOL! What a fun play on the musical terms to make your reader smile!! ;) A great offering for this unusual contest, Mystery Author - thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls!! ;)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Yvette. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
=]
Ron
Comment from pome lover
clever, cute, and funny.
You said a lot in those few words.
And you made me chuckle.
good luck in the contest.
pome lover
FS wants more words. that is what I wanted to say.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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clever, cute, and funny.
You said a lot in those few words.
And you made me chuckle.
good luck in the contest.
pome lover
FS wants more words. that is what I wanted to say.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Pome Lover. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. I hope you have a great weekend.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is hilarious. And the piano player in me loved that grand piano and thought the piece was well orchestrated (lol). The metaphor in "you'll just B-flat" was very clever. He'll certainly be flat when six feet under (lol). And the name you gave it was very cool. Liked your creativity and the choice of an artwork. Your rendition certainly wasn't off-key (smile).
Thanks for joining.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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This is hilarious. And the piano player in me loved that grand piano and thought the piece was well orchestrated (lol). The metaphor in "you'll just B-flat" was very clever. He'll certainly be flat when six feet under (lol). And the name you gave it was very cool. Liked your creativity and the choice of an artwork. Your rendition certainly wasn't off-key (smile).
Thanks for joining.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Hey, Y, hello. Thank you so much for the outstanding review and giant sixer. My mother played piano all my life and I can plink a little bit on it. My instrument of choice is the guitar though. I tried getting the 'witty' aspect of the contest in there. I had fun with it. Thank you for creating the contest. Hopefully you'll get more takers to join in. The picture was actually 2 different pics, the singer and the casket. But I used my art program to combine them. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating, Y. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have yourself a wonderful day.
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Thanks for the reply, Ron. The contest is almost full. Thanks for joining.
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I noticed that. I must have been thinking of another contest. Glad it's getting filled up.
Comment from Earl Corp
I think this could have been a puntastic contest entry too, your last line was a musical pun. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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I think this could have been a puntastic contest entry too, your last line was a musical pun. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Earl. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Epitaph for a Rival contest.
This short verse tells of betrayal.
Nicely done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Epitaph for a Rival contest.
This short verse tells of betrayal.
Nicely done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Sharon. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
