The Beginners
unmasked mystery10 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two hundred and fifty words about the secret ones who start the Coronavirus are the only ones left and they will start life all over again as Adam and Eve.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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A very well-written two hundred and fifty words about the secret ones who start the Coronavirus are the only ones left and they will start life all over again as Adam and Eve.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Mia Twysted
As I finished I was somewhat confused. I see that there is a man who is seems to me to be following a woman of sorts. He seems like a stalker. However I got lost in the
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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As I finished I was somewhat confused. I see that there is a man who is seems to me to be following a woman of sorts. He seems like a stalker. However I got lost in the
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you and so sorry for my one month delay
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a sketchy beginning sentence but you carried the tone on well, continuing the setting, character study, and plot. The best part was the reveal, mask down. We found out who they really were. Clever.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This is a sketchy beginning sentence but you carried the tone on well, continuing the setting, character study, and plot. The best part was the reveal, mask down. We found out who they really were. Clever.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and please forgive me for my late replay.
Comment from equestrik
Well, though i cringe a bit at the language, i can appreciate the write and the concept. It is easy to see how this pandemic could theoretically go this way.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Well, though i cringe a bit at the language, i can appreciate the write and the concept. It is easy to see how this pandemic could theoretically go this way.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you and please forgive me for my late replay.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a lot of fun and I am still laughing! I certainly hope this does not mean that we start all over again! But who knows what will happen to the human race, we are our own worst enemies, your entry is very entertaining, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This is such a lot of fun and I am still laughing! I certainly hope this does not mean that we start all over again! But who knows what will happen to the human race, we are our own worst enemies, your entry is very entertaining, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you and please forgive me for my late replay.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Unmasked writing prompt.
This is an interesting story, well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Unmasked writing prompt.
This is an interesting story, well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 250 word flash fiction speaks discovery of Jordan, the act of unmasking made everything clear and easy, now both are immune, the beginners; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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This 250 word flash fiction speaks discovery of Jordan, the act of unmasking made everything clear and easy, now both are immune, the beginners; well said, well done, thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
Comment from royowen
I suppose if my wife and I were the only two left, it would be rather amazing and a bit of a joke really, mind you I would be rather young, Adam lived to be 905, not sure about Eve, beautifully written. Most imaginative and a great thought. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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I suppose if my wife and I were the only two left, it would be rather amazing and a bit of a joke really, mind you I would be rather young, Adam lived to be 905, not sure about Eve, beautifully written. Most imaginative and a great thought. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
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Well done
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(humankind is one word; typo: she said IS just an experiment s/b IT'S)
Quite a twist-- a triple one--fher accusation, his defense, her revelation. Adam and Eve! I didn't see that coming; in retrospect the pic was a hint. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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(humankind is one word; typo: she said IS just an experiment s/b IT'S)
Quite a twist-- a triple one--fher accusation, his defense, her revelation. Adam and Eve! I didn't see that coming; in retrospect the pic was a hint. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you and please forgive me for my late replay.
Comment from lancellot
Honestly, there is a little confusion in the middle which I believe is his past or his imagination. Not sure.
"Silly, I choose you, so you are immune as well. We are the only one left. We are the beginners! Adam and Eve!"
- choose or chose
- one or ones
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Honestly, there is a little confusion in the middle which I believe is his past or his imagination. Not sure.
"Silly, I choose you, so you are immune as well. We are the only one left. We are the beginners! Adam and Eve!"
- choose or chose
- one or ones
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
