senryu (what to keep open)
An emotion of hope beyond despair.15 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This poem is a note of hope. Hopefully, the reader will take this to heart. There are too many closed hearts. Closed in many ways. This poem can be a cautionary tale. There are fearful people spewing their hate and confusion. This was well thought out.
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This poem is a note of hope. Hopefully, the reader will take this to heart. There are too many closed hearts. Closed in many ways. This poem can be a cautionary tale. There are fearful people spewing their hate and confusion. This was well thought out.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This poem is a note of hope. Hopefully, the reader will take this to heart. There are too many closed hearts. Closed in many ways. This poem can be a cautionary tale. There are fearful people spewing their hate and confusion. This was well thought out.
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This poem is a note of hope. Hopefully, the reader will take this to heart. There are too many closed hearts. Closed in many ways. This poem can be a cautionary tale. There are fearful people spewing their hate and confusion. This was well thought out.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Senryu writing prompt.
This short piece has a good message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Senryu writing prompt.
This short piece has a good message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
This is a possitive message to be putting out there in the world. It is so important that people know that just cause we are closed off doesn't mean we have to be closed off.
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This is a possitive message to be putting out there in the world. It is so important that people know that just cause we are closed off doesn't mean we have to be closed off.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, What to Keep Open, presented as a 5-7-5, reminds the reader that imagination and faith will always serve the seeker.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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This senryu, What to Keep Open, presented as a 5-7-5, reminds the reader that imagination and faith will always serve the seeker.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Anonymous,
Nice entry for the Write A Senryu writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the thought provoking heart and mind topic. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Hello, Anonymous,
Nice entry for the Write A Senryu writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I like the thought provoking heart and mind topic. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Suzanne Albers
Very important words of wisdom is these difficult times.
With so many people suffering from numerous things, this is a very important statement. Also staying calm and positive and taking action to do the right thing will eventually make things better.. good job
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Very important words of wisdom is these difficult times.
With so many people suffering from numerous things, this is a very important statement. Also staying calm and positive and taking action to do the right thing will eventually make things better.. good job
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the message conveyed in this. It gives the reader a sense of hope in the midst of all obstacles. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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I love the message conveyed in this. It gives the reader a sense of hope in the midst of all obstacles. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
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Thanks for your kind words, Jeffrey.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu in times of distress and hardship we can still dream and have an open mind to see the good beyond the bad that can be overwhelming.
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A very well-written Senryu in times of distress and hardship we can still dream and have an open mind to see the good beyond the bad that can be overwhelming.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
Comment from roof35
You followed the rules and penned an excellent poem for the Senryu contest. Your illustration pairs well. What more can I say about three lines except nicely done.
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You followed the rules and penned an excellent poem for the Senryu contest. Your illustration pairs well. What more can I say about three lines except nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2020
