Po Am
a poem15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever write with some great inventive words and thinking out of the box has produced a magical poem brought to life by nonconformity! A praiseworthy write filled with magical touches that brought joy to my ears, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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This is a clever write with some great inventive words and thinking out of the box has produced a magical poem brought to life by nonconformity! A praiseworthy write filled with magical touches that brought joy to my ears, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from LisaMay
Your 'goetry' is going, going, gone in a fit of laughter (mine). I love the silly willyness of these entertaining lines - you obviously had a lot of fun writing this. Be careful of stepping on that toast if it's got honey on it.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Your 'goetry' is going, going, gone in a fit of laughter (mine). I love the silly willyness of these entertaining lines - you obviously had a lot of fun writing this. Be careful of stepping on that toast if it's got honey on it.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Lisa
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
A delightful flight of wit and whimsy--clever tease--instead of SAME you use a wordy non-rhyme--play of seas/seize. Great ending with misspelling spilling. This may well be a winner. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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A delightful flight of wit and whimsy--clever tease--instead of SAME you use a wordy non-rhyme--play of seas/seize. Great ending with misspelling spilling. This may well be a winner. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thanks, Liz.
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
Marvelous play on the structures that can be so confining while still toying with them towards a purpose. A fun romp of word choice and denying the expected. Nice job creating some wonderful nonsensical yet meaningful lines.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Marvelous play on the structures that can be so confining while still toying with them towards a purpose. A fun romp of word choice and denying the expected. Nice job creating some wonderful nonsensical yet meaningful lines.
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you, LK
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
I really liked this poem.
I can't be sure that I got your point some of the time but I worked on it. The fact I was interested in working on it, is a tribute to it being a good poem :)
The images I understood, I liked a lot. I love that sonnets are Mike and limericks are Spike. I especially liked the second verse where you could have rhymed the last line but didn't.
There was so much energy in this poem that I could feel it even if I didn't understand all the points you were making.
I really liked the aquatic birds, why they were there, I don't know...but I like them.
I wanted to write a review in the language you used...that would have been fun.
But I'm old and tired so I won't embarrass myself by trying to do that.
I'm going to give you six stars because I am still smiling and I can't see how you could improve on this poem. Good luck with your further work.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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I really liked this poem.
I can't be sure that I got your point some of the time but I worked on it. The fact I was interested in working on it, is a tribute to it being a good poem :)
The images I understood, I liked a lot. I love that sonnets are Mike and limericks are Spike. I especially liked the second verse where you could have rhymed the last line but didn't.
There was so much energy in this poem that I could feel it even if I didn't understand all the points you were making.
I really liked the aquatic birds, why they were there, I don't know...but I like them.
I wanted to write a review in the language you used...that would have been fun.
But I'm old and tired so I won't embarrass myself by trying to do that.
I'm going to give you six stars because I am still smiling and I can't see how you could improve on this poem. Good luck with your further work.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Cynthia, for the terrific review. There may be areas that require notes, but, I would likely do that point for point.
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Thanks for your response. I'm still smilin'.
