Teachers plight
to teach so that they might learn27 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
An excellent job in creating this monostich. You packed volumes in that one line, and I like your imagery and visuals. I also enjoyed your artistic presentation and artwork.
That should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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An excellent job in creating this monostich. You packed volumes in that one line, and I like your imagery and visuals. I also enjoyed your artistic presentation and artwork.
That should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Eternal Muse, thank you for your kind review,
Comment from Sally Law
That's a lot of m's! My, my! A creative response for the one liner, dear Jay, and I wish you all the best for the upcoming contest. Blessings!
Sal xo
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That's a lot of m's! My, my! A creative response for the one liner, dear Jay, and I wish you all the best for the upcoming contest. Blessings!
Sal xo
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Sal, thanks alot! I am very appreciative of your good wishes.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent one line poem Jim, great alliteration, and it compares favourably with too many cooks soil the broth. But this is a great alliterative presentation and entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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This is an excellent one line poem Jim, great alliteration, and it compares favourably with too many cooks soil the broth. But this is a great alliterative presentation and entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Roy, thank you the alliteration just these one liners the punch to pull them off.
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Well done
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, a great one line with complete alliteration. What's more it makes sense - not easy to get a message across in just one line. Lovely picture - if only teachers worked is such a lovely place. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Hello JLR, a great one line with complete alliteration. What's more it makes sense - not easy to get a message across in just one line. Lovely picture - if only teachers worked is such a lovely place. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Dorothy thank you for the good wishes
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Teachers' Plight, uses seven words and reminds the reader that education is tough in the best conditions and made practically ridiculous in the daily changing, on/off scenarios now.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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This one-line poem, Teachers' Plight, uses seven words and reminds the reader that education is tough in the best conditions and made practically ridiculous in the daily changing, on/off scenarios now.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Bill, thank you
Comment from Julie Sandy
Great poem for one line thats not easy to do, I read it over a few times and then I got it lol.
It sums up everything a teacher is and does really.
Very clever
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Great poem for one line thats not easy to do, I read it over a few times and then I got it lol.
It sums up everything a teacher is and does really.
Very clever
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Julie, thank you for your time taken to read and comment on my little one-liner.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Oh, so true. I taught for MANY years. I gave it all I had; sometimes my own mind became muddled as I tried to think of new ways to teach old ideas. You have made excellent use of all words in your alliterative one-liner.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Oh, so true. I taught for MANY years. I gave it all I had; sometimes my own mind became muddled as I tried to think of new ways to teach old ideas. You have made excellent use of all words in your alliterative one-liner.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Janice, I am smiling back!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Teachers plight", is short, succinct, and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet tells it as it is. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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"Teachers plight", is short, succinct, and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet tells it as it is. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Thank you I apprecaite it.
Comment from Mastery
A wonderful example of alliteration, Jim. Much can be learned from this one-liner in and of itself, I think you have a winner here. Good Luck. Bobs
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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A wonderful example of alliteration, Jim. Much can be learned from this one-liner in and of itself, I think you have a winner here. Good Luck. Bobs
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Bob, thank you much, I do trust you are doing well as fall has moved into full swing. Jim
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Still here, Jm LOL Bob
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Still here, Jm LOL Bob
Comment from Boogienights
This is terrific! A wonderful one line poem that makes all kinds of sense and each word starting with the letter M. Your image fits perfectly with your words, best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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This is terrific! A wonderful one line poem that makes all kinds of sense and each word starting with the letter M. Your image fits perfectly with your words, best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Boggienights, thank you very much, I appreciate your validation.
