With these short bits, immediate impact is important. This one hit the mar best. Two others were about ties for me until I saw this. The girl and the do one and the butterfly one were pretty good. This is a cut or two above. Great job.
This poem like "the ember's fading glow" left the most long-lasting impression.
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