Very well written and enjoyable to read.
An AWESOME essay, Mystery Author. You give readers an interesting story, great ideas, show how perseverance and believing in oneself is crucial, and much to think about in their own lives. Everything is interwoven well. Your presentation is EXCEPTIONAL! Here's to a first place win! Anonymous Author
I can really relate to the workplace lunchroom chatter (strangely similar no matter the region) and I love how the predictable and safe setting contrasts the inspirational message and the uncertainty of believing in your dreams.
In one word, "AWESOME!" It is an honor to review/vote for an "ASTONISHING WRITER" such as YOU, Anonymous. My thoughts: "Writing is unarguably a passionate art form. Throughout the centuries, it has provided us with an outlet for exploring our innermost thoughts and emotions." Of course, your message makes this crystal clear. A "Salute" for the "Extremely Impressive Aish Video!" Best wishes for a contest win and God Bless. Mystery Writer.
This is the funnier of the two.
You have explained about writing well explained.
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