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4/6/4 Modern Late Winter Haiku

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Silent Snowman

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

silent snowman 
melts in warm winter day —
crow eats carrot


 



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MODERN HAIKU is the English adaptation of Classic Haiku. It's written in one to four lines with no strict syllable count, but brief and often with a long/short or short/long asymmetry. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Images don't need to be taken from nature, though they often are. Seasonality is optional, though often featured. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. the em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. Haiku usually doesnâ??t have a title but in fanstory we have to have one. The Haiku Foundation of America

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

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