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A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Cabin by Bleak Lake

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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one last chance 
to save our marriage —
we  rake
dying amber embers
in the feeble fireplace



 




Bleak Lake, Alberta, Canada

MODERN TANKA is a Japanese poetic form. The form was created 1,200 years ago. It used to be written between lovers but now you can write about anything you want. Like haiku, it's written in a succinct manner in 31 syllables (5/7/5/7/7) OR LESS. Personification, metaphor, and simile are permitted in Tanka. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. No end rhymes. click here if you want to see modern tanka examples -- click here if you want to read free online tanka book -- click here to read Tanka Society of America

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