General Poetry posted February 2, 2023


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Man or woman- doesn`t matter

It`s Like...

by Kaiku

a song without melody
absent of lyrics
the sun without warmth
another distant star
the moon faceless and dull
a harvest without her
journeys in blurred vision
tears being relentless
a breath of air hard fought
life`s cruel vacuum
 
now that you`re gone
this is what it`s like

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