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Gogyohka Poem Suite

A chapter in the book 2024 Japanese Poetry

My Siren

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

before we met

my life was a lazy boat 

drifting at sea

headed to nowhere

until you found me

 

the storm led me to you

my alluring siren 

singing songs of change

you saved me from drowning 

and I dove into you

 

 

 

 




SIREN In Greek mythology, sirens are humanlike beings with alluring voices; they appear in a scene in the Odyssey in which Odysseus saves his crew's lives. The suren in my poem went rogue. LoL

Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy

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