Mature Fiction posted April 14, 2024


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Now that is real FLASH fiction!

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by Douglas Goff

The author has placed a warning on this post for language.
The author has placed a warning on this post for sexual content.


He quickened his pace, euphoric excitement building below his waist. He'd been following the woman for blocks.  
 
She was petite with long black hair, just how he liked. When she went to cross the dark street, he ran up on her, causing her to turn. 
 
"Hey!" He whipped open his trench coat, exposing his six-inches of raging manhood, the powerful adrenaline rush of his perversion filling him. 
 
The woman smiled and popped open her trench coat, revealing her own nudity. Her penis was much larger than his. The pervert slunk back into the darkness, his moment of glory shriveling away. 



100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry

Recognized

#21
April
2024


I know. I have a warped sense of justice. I have laughed every single time I reread this, picturing the disillusioned pervert slinking away. Still hasnâ??t worn off.
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