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Haiku (rules in author notes)
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Blue Dusk

by Gypsy Blue Rose

blue dusk

rides the  river waves —

holding on to moon shadows 





HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, enlightening the reader and making an insightful connection. English Haiku doesn't follow the 5/7/5 form, because Japanese syllables are much shorter. The rule of thumb is to write it as succinctly as possible and 17 syllables or less.

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click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Painting by Kasamatsu Shiro; all parts of my poems and presentations are copyrighted and registered with fanstory.

cat stevens song, "moon shadow", comes to mind but it has no relation to the poem
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