Mystery and Crime Fiction posted September 15, 2024 Chapters:  ...7 8 -9- 


The plot thickens.

A chapter in the book Murder At The Berkshire

Unidentified Benefactor

by Douglas Goff


Previously:

With Hattie being alone and her children living out of state, the older daughter placed her in a home for the elderly. Unfortunately, she finds herself even more lonely surrounded by people. When Hattie learns of the mysterious death of Mr. Howell up on the fourth floor, she decides to look into it. The ladies create the Senior Sleuth Society. They decide they need to visit Room 413, where Mr. Howell died. There, they discovered an earring.
 
New:

Hattie sat on her bed studying the earring intently. It had an intricate gold and silver interloping design with a quarter diamond placed in a center setting. Although it was fairly simplistic in design, she was certain that it was expensive. It is unique. Someone must be looking for this.  

She heard a noise that she hadn’t heard in a very long time. It was a giggle that had unexpectedly slipped from her very own lips. This is too much fun! The other ladies had agreed it was a hoot last night, after they had all made it safely back to her room. Her friends were all very excited about the case. 

And the earring! The ladies thought it was a great find! Jubilee Joy believed that it meant the killer was rich. Narcoleptic Nelly thought it meant the killer was a female. Narcissistic Nancy added that their nemesis must be a pretty gal. Hattie knew that it guaranteed none of those things. Only facts could do that. After much hearty yawning, the ladies had departed to their own rooms just before dawn. 

Attending meals wasn’t mandatory, and skipping them wouldn’t even be noticed until a resident skipped several. So, all four of the tired sleuths decided to sleep through breakfast and lunch. Hattie had awoken just after one o’clock.  

Another noise caught her attention. A different noise that certainly hadn’t come from her. The rustling of paper, followed by some movement, caught her eye over by her door. What was that? Hattie jumped up and went over to the door. Someone had slipped a note under the crack at the bottom. By the time she got the door open, nobody was there.  

Hattie shut her door and stared at the folded piece of paper sitting on her floor. She reached down and picked it up, her hand slightly shaking. Unfolding it, she stared at the words before her. What in tarnation?

Madam,

I’ve learned of your investigation into the Howell murder. I thought you should know that both he and Phil were vying for the amorous attentions of one, Becky Hazel. It was a torrid love triangle of sorts, and although strictly platonic in nature, created an intense rivalry between the two men, fueled by jealousy. Hope this helps your endeavors.

Now Hattie’s hand was shaking from excitement. Oh my, my, my. She had to reread it. Twice.

An hour later, Hattie and the Senior Sleuth Society were gathered in the small library. She passed the letter around to the group. After a lot of bubbling gasps and sighs, the ladies settled down.

“Thanks to our unidentified benefactor, we now have our first possible motive.” Hattie couldn’t keep from smiling.

“But who would give you this?” Narcissistic Nancy questioned, examining the note suspiciously, like she might spot a fingerprint. 

“She doesn’t know, Nancy. That’s why she said ‘unidentified benefactor’," Chatty Cathy pointed out with a big shrug. 

“Maybe our benefactor knows more than what was in the letter?” Nelly’s face fell forward onto the table, a snore popping out. 

Hattie shook her head at the sleeping woman, then shrugged herself. “Regardless, someone in The Berkshire is an ally. We need to figure out who that person is.”

“How?” Joy asked. 

Hattie rose. “We’ll have to figure it out later. For now, I must be going. I don’t want to be late. I have a meeting to attend.”

“With who?” All Senior Sleuth Society eyes turned on her, minus the set that was closed, after Cathy voiced the question.

Hattie grimaced. “Director Harold Chapman.”

CHARACTERS:
 
Key Residents
Hattie May Hatfield-New resident who used to be an author
Katherinne Beck-Chatty Kathy, a resident who talks constantly
Jubilee Joy-Bubbly lady
Narcoleptic Nelly-Plump, purple-fashioned lady, who falls asleep
Art Antica-A cold, but cute resident
Jerk Beefy-An amorous sleazy resident
Moaning Lisa-Jerk Beefy's girlfriend
Narcissistic Nancy-Pretty lady who loves the mirror
Lesser Residents
Grumpy Gus-A cranky, very old residents
Barfett-a slovenly resident who eats sloppy
Windy Wendy-A resident who constantly passes gas
Pharmacuetical Phil Barnes-Supplies pills to the male residents
 
Employees
Harold Chapman-Pencil pushing Berkshire Director
SUSPECT Debra-The Berkshire Nurse
SUSPECT Mrs. Janice Cooley-Attendant
SUSPECT Harvey Marsh- Attendant
SUSPECT Becky Hazel- Attendent
SUSPECT Jimmy Williams-Attendant
SUSPECT Carmen Marsala-Attendant
 
Deceased
Edward Howell-Sent to the 4th floor, then suspiciously died
Paul Hatfield-Hattie's deceased police detective husband
Extras
Sarah Hatfield-Hattie's oldest daughter
Detective Steele-Hattie's deceased husband's old partner
Marcy-Narcisistic Nancy's sister


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