Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 2, 2025


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Music enters us and lives forever 8,8,7,9 rhyme

Mr. Music

by Lulube

Mr. Music, you excite me
I'm so glad you are what you are
You skim over mountain tops
Riding the tail of a shooting star
 
 
Mr. Music, you're always there
With your arms to wrap around me
You comfort me in sad times
Lifting me higher to set me free
 
Mr. Music, you fill my heart
Sweetness keeps beating to find love
My heart spills over with joy
Promise I'll float to heaven's above?
 
Mr. Music, you're ev'ry where
I want to dance and twirl around
You wear so many colors
Your bril'
yance is shining through your sound
 
Mr. Music, playing so loud
Those lost melodies inside me
Suddenly I start to sing
Life's salvation, you always will be
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 




I can't believe I totally struggled to make this first post after more than 2 yrs. of being absent. But I see that some of the program is still struggling too. On posting window, at the bottom of the page it says, paragraphs: 6 and it had me fooled into searching for a missing verse, there is only 5. Sorry about the photo not coming across better. I did edit it, although it is a blurry scene, it can be better. It brings the thought of music living on after we are gone. Hope you can relate to it all.

Bril'yance is deliberate, to fit the 9 syllable line. personally I think it should always be spelt this way.
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