Mr. Music
Music enters us and lives forever 8,8,7,9 rhyme5 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi there is a deeper meaning to this write and I like it, ,for deeper in oneself there are so beautiful music, we only need to sit quiet and shift the pages of our imagination, the best one will always come that will uplift and guide you.
Benny
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
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Hi there is a deeper meaning to this write and I like it, ,for deeper in oneself there are so beautiful music, we only need to sit quiet and shift the pages of our imagination, the best one will always come that will uplift and guide you.
Benny
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
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thxs for your insightful review, glad it's to your liking
lulube
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I am happy
Benny
Comment from poetwatch
Glad to know that you still can sing, Lulube. :) I say I'm happy and that's the truth, for when your voice became silent, I didn't know where you be. You love the music that the man brings. Only love can make us all sing. Thank you for sharing. S O M O
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Glad to know that you still can sing, Lulube. :) I say I'm happy and that's the truth, for when your voice became silent, I didn't know where you be. You love the music that the man brings. Only love can make us all sing. Thank you for sharing. S O M O
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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I know it's been over 2 yrs. but I miss my escape through writing and through friends on here and their writings. So nice to feel missed, thank you oh and for the sweet review.
lulube
Comment from royowen
I sing and play the guitar for the littles in children's church, my wife does the actions, and reads the story, they call me mr music, I loved this poem. Easy to read and yes, music from my parent's time I still hear, but they are gone, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I sing and play the guitar for the littles in children's church, my wife does the actions, and reads the story, they call me mr music, I loved this poem. Easy to read and yes, music from my parent's time I still hear, but they are gone, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Well How bout that? My first posting in over 2 years and I write for you. lol glad to have made a special imprint with you. Thxs for review.
lulube
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your poem very much. Your syllable counts were correct, and I liked the repetition of "Mr. Music." Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed your poem very much. Your syllable counts were correct, and I liked the repetition of "Mr. Music." Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thxs for your time and review. Glad you enjoyed it.
lulube
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is full of joy! I love how you bring Mr. Music to life! He feels like a friend and a source of happiness. The way you describe music as something that lifts is so beautiful. It makes me want to dance right along with your words!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Your poem is full of joy! I love how you bring Mr. Music to life! He feels like a friend and a source of happiness. The way you describe music as something that lifts is so beautiful. It makes me want to dance right along with your words!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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thank you so much for your expressive remarks. I don't know where my life would have gone if I didn't have music in it.
lulube
