General Poetry posted November 20, 2014 Chapters:  ...93 94 -95- 96... 


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A chapter in the book Poems

Ann Tonnim

by Bill Schott

She mends
my heart and breaks
my concentration.

I'm loose
and clinging now
to what was then.

Once a piece
but soon my whole
salvation.

Damnation
leads from her
and falls with him.

Ann Tonnim
a synonym
for angel.

That a devil
is too blind
to see.




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The end words on each pair of lines are somewhat of an antonym to each other. (mend - break)
Thanks to Bruceiorio for the cool graphic.
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